Bebo

Dear readers.
Many of you have stated that I have typos in my work. I take a long time to try and remove all typos, but apparantly some have still got through.
If you spot any typos in my story, can I ask you to take the time out and note them down here.
Thanks
From Saint

Magic Information

OK, I'm doing a short summary of magic in the world of Princess Lupato.

Firstly, There are 4 types of Magic, Faith, Hope, Loathe and Hate. Each type has it's own element, which is controlled by one person. (The master of that element)
Faith - Water
Hope - Wind
Loathe - Fire
Hate - Earth
Each element is strong against one, and weak against one. (Arrows point to the weaker element)

Water --> Fire
^................|
|................v
Wind<--Earth

The magical ranks are:

1. High Sorcerer
2. Medium Sorcerer
3. Sorcerer
4. High Level Magician
5. Medium Level Magician
6. Low Level Magician
7. Underqualified Magician
8. Non-Magical Human

Note: To raise through the ranks, the magician must pass a test for each, but The High Sorcerer rank can only be presented by a King, or another High Sorcerer.

Magical Law says that a magician may not perform spell of a higher rank than themselves. The exception to this rule is that if a magician who is on or above the rank of the spell (and is able to perform the spell themselves) is present, then the lower level magician may perform the spell with the permission of the higher ranked magician.
Spell ranks are below, as are the Ranks of each sorcerer revealed so far.

Spells:

Faith
Flight - Level 1
Change - Level 6
Levitation - Level 4
Water - [Elemental spell, unranked]

Hope
Speed - Level 4
Wind - [Elemental spell, unranked]

Loathe
Shield - Level 5
Fire - [Elemental spell, unranked]

Hate
Earth - [Elemental spell, unranked]

Magicians:

Faith
Princess Lupato Karamune - Rank 1 - Defender
Hal Dagal - Rank 5
Miranda Dagal - Rank 7
Makoto Hechi - Rank 4
Eulalie Metona - Rank 5

Hope
Prince Yokatu Karamune - Rank 1 - Defender (Deceased)
Master Keitaro Dagal* - Rank 3 - Defender
Misa Avalon - Rank 5

Loathe
Master Haruko - Rank 1 - Defender
Khato - Rank [5+]**
Mr Heiro Avalon - Rank 3

Hate
Mistress Hiroko - Rank 1 - Defender

** Khato's rank is unknown, but he performed a level 5 Spell (Shield) without an observer, so he is definately above rank 5.
* Keitaro Dagal is a Hope magician, but he was born into a family of Faith magicians, and passed all his tests up to level 3 as a Faith magician.

[NOTE: THIS SECTION WILL CONTAIN SPOILERS FOR ANYONE WHO HAS NOT READ ALL OF WHAT I HAVE PUT ONTO BEBO, BUT I WONT POST ANYTHING HERE THAT I HAVENT WRITTEN YET.]

Updates
[05/08/08] Added Keitaro Dagal
[05/08/08] Added Taiboku
[05/08/08] Added "Name meanings" for each character
[16/08/08] Added "Description Taken from the story" for each character
[16/08/08] Changed Formatting slightly
[16/08/08] Added Mr Hal Avalon
[16/08/08] Added Heiro Dagal
[16/08/08] Added Miranda Dagal
[16/08/08] Added Misa Avalon
[18/08/08] Added Khato
[18/08/08] Added Fella
[18/08/08] Added "Gender" for each character
[28/08/08] Added "Magical Rank" for each character
[28/08/08] Added "First Appearance" for each character
[28/08/08] Added "Last Appearance" for Yokatu Karamune
[28/08/08] Added "Characters which only appear briefly"
[28/08/08] Edited Keitaro Dagal's information to include his Palace name
[28/08/08] Added George
[28/08/08] Added Makoto Sydney Hechi
[28/08/08] Added Eulalie Metona
[28/08/08] Added Master Staten Haruko
[28/08/08] Added King Karamune

Princess Lupato Karamune
Loo-pa-tow Ka-ra-moon
Name Meaning: None, the author made it up.
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Relationships: Yokatu Karamune (Deceased, Fiancee before death) Maro (Master)
Magical Rank: 1
First Appearance: Chapter 1

Description taken from the story
[Currently Undescribed]

Author's Description
Princess of the kingdom of Karamune. [Being the daughter of the King.] She is also the youngest of the 4 High sorcerers who are assigned with the duty of protecting the kingdom of Karamune from attacks. Her skill is with Faith Magic and she is the current master of Water - The Faith element. Despite controlling the element of water, her most poweful spell is the flight spell, and she can actually grow wings from her back to fly with, where all other Faith magicians can only float using the spell.

Maro
Ma-row
Name Meaning: Maro is a Japanese name which means "Myself"
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Relationships: Lupato Karamune (Guardian) Nori (Brother)
Magical Rank: [None, but is as powerful as a Rank 1 Magician]
First Appearance: Chapter 1

Description taken from the story
"Maro. The princess’ Guardian. He had two forms he could take, each with different abilities. Firstly he had his ‘Fake form’, which was a small winged black kitten. This was the form he stayed in for most of his time. His other was a Black winged panther. This form was much more capable, but it came with one major downside. Staying in this form for longer than ten minutes would drain any magical energy he had at an alarming rate."

Author's Description
Maro is the guardian of the Water element, and more importantly, it's possesor. It is his job to make sure no harm befalls Princess Lupato. He has two forms which he can change between at will. His first is his 'fake' form, a small winged black kitten. While in this form, Maro is much faster and more agile, but only has half of his magical energy. His 'true' form is a large black Panther. While in this form he has all of his magical energy, and can borrow energy from the Water around him, including the density in the air, but he cannot stay in the form long, as it takes a lot of energy to sustain after 10 minutes.

Prince Yokatu Karamune
Yow-ka-too Ka-ra-moon
Name meaning: None, The author made it up.
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Relationships - Lupato Karamune (Fiancee) Nori (Master)
Magical Rank: 1
First Appearance: Chapter 1
Last Appearance: Chapter 1 [Dies]

Description taken from the story
[Currently Undescribed]

Author's Description
Prince of the kingdom of Karamune [Being the son of the Queen] He is one of the 4 high sorcerers assigned with the duty of protecting the Kingdom of Karamune against outsider attacks. His skill is with Hope Magic and he was the master of