poems from the heart
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This is just a few poems that i want to get peoples opinions on to see if there good enough for the future as i want to be a writer when i leave school.
i try to write about things i feel people can relate to or what they feel they have gone through but not known how to express it in the right way..let me know if ye can relate to any of these poems..x
my pomes are personal to me and write for my own good too its a way of releasing your emotions and i love it
check out my homepage to http://nad-cookie.bebo.com
if you come to this page please leave a comment to tell me what you think of the poems.
peace out..xxx
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W R i T e s .21 Wochen herCheck Out my Writing on My page
its Writing of my Life ish =) - 69 Wochen her via Handy
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i'm quite young(under 16) so i may not be the best
but i've been told i have talent
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Michaela79 Wochen herplease use spellcheck
and i hate rhyming poetry... so i could say dont do that either...
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Smurphy Lee82 Wochen herhi my names amy i havent read your poems yet and i will after this but a min ago i was judt reading that but up the top of the page.
you said that you try to write things that you think people can relate to.
i always really thought that poets wrote when they were more in the heat of a moment and needed to get their thoughts somewhere.
thats not saying that your poems wont be good because you kind of plan more what you will write but maybe its a good idea to think about it because i think that that is when your best poetry can come out.
you dont have to pay attention to any of this anyway. lol ill go read them now then -
Bebos Authors Poets and All Round Writers87 Wochen herHeres your invite to this writers group
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Smoke and Knives90 Wochen herIf you can't sleep, take a sleeping pill. Sleep is critical to your overall well being. Just make sure not to take sleeping pills more than 3 days in a row.
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Brandon92 Wochen heryou've got talent...keep pursuing it!
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Poetry105 Wochen hergood...
i have just made this book...
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Izzie109 Wochen herkk i will cheers!
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Poems Prayers Lyrics110 Wochen hercheckout mine just click on me
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Beckie-Louise112 Wochen herhey just found ur page and thought id let ya noe ur poems are awsome, its good cos i can relate to sum so ta
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datz whtz up i love da poem
von Liiviin My Liife 71 Wochen herWellity wellity wellity Hmmm, I gave you three stars because I did enjoy the poems, but, just in my personal opinion, I'm not a a fan of the dragging lines that stick out in places. I just couldn't get comfortable reading it. Appearance does matter, I'd reserve that weapon of yours for a poem where you want to make the reader feel uneasy. So in all, I liked the poems, just not so much the stucture of some of them.
von P 78 Wochen herSure you may aswell give mine a read and let me know what you think.
http://www.bebo.com/mehidontreallycare
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hey so umm i read your poems i actually really liked them
von Smurphy Lee 82 Wochen hercongratulations and commiseratios was probably the best i think. you made good points
only thing is like grammar and spelling but who cares about that??
id like if you took a look at mine and let me know what you think
http://www.bebo.com/adaughtersintuition
http://www.bebo.com/highandlowpoems
thanks =)
Wow Some of the stuff u have written here is amazing, you have a real talent for expressing yourself.
von James H 85 Wochen herI liked all of them buts 'Facts' is especially good.
Check out this if ur killing time, http://www.bebo.com/Fightfeelings
Jmz
they're pretty good the subject ses it all nadine!
von Robbie 86 Wochen heru have some skill!
poems i really liked your poems and the only reason i have given you 3 stars is because i couldnt get into them and couldnt really find a flow! if you write anymore poems please let me know and i will re rate because i wud love 2 give u 4 stars.
von Rasta- G -Man 88 Wochen herif you wud like 2 check out my poems visit http://www.bebo.com/rasta-g
thankyou and keep writing
poem your peoms are great
von Sarah Thomson 97 Wochen heryour can tell that some of them comes from the heart they have got feelings
i write peoms aswell
keep going and you can make a book of them
i can see it i wish i could give 3 and a half stars, but i can't sorry. Iliked the poems, but i didn't love them. I'm gonna become a fan because the poems have real promise, so that when you add more i can maybe make it 4 or 5 out of 5 stars.
von Only Unwin. 100 Wochen herVocab and flow could use a look
but otherwise very good standard
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sweet hey... nice poems. i like ur style of writing. keep it up, n go for ur dream
von Thomas Crichton 105 Wochen hercheck mine out if u want. www.bebo.com/simplequestion
let me know what u think
thanks xx