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| !!!!!SHARE DA LOVE!!!! | Category Poetry Publisher i wish i had 1.. URL http://www.bebo.com/poemsfromtheheart Profile Created February 2007 Profile Views 2337 times Share the Luv
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Facts.
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Shattered into a million pieces
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A place to cry
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congratulation's and commiseration's
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i wont ask you to love me.
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covers it with a lie
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false hope..((this 1 was made by me and my mate kelly))
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deprived little rose
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never appear again.
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doubtful
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conversations with myself
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Left in despair
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xxx
datz whtz up i love da poem
by Liiviin My Liife 49 weeks agoWellity wellity wellity Hmmm, I gave you three stars because I did enjoy the poems, but, just in my personal opinion, I'm not a a fan of the dragging lines that stick out in places. I just couldn't get comfortable reading it. Appearance does matter, I'd reserve that weapon of yours for a poem where you want to make the reader feel uneasy. So in all, I liked the poems, just not so much the stucture of some of them.
by Felix P. Silvestris 55 weeks agoSure you may aswell give mine a read and let me know what you think.
http://www.bebo.com/mehidontreallycare
cheers
hey so umm i read your poems i actually really liked them
by Smurphy Lee 60 weeks agocongratulations and commiseratios was probably the best i think. you made good points
only thing is like grammar and spelling but who cares about that??
id like if you took a look at mine and let me know what you think
http://www.bebo.com/adaughtersintuition
http://www.bebo.com/highandlowpoems
thanks =)
Wow Some of the stuff u have written here is amazing, you have a real talent for expressing yourself.
by James H 63 weeks agoI liked all of them buts 'Facts' is especially good.
Check out this if ur killing time, http://www.bebo.com/Fightfeelings
Jmz
they're pretty good the subject ses it all nadine!
by Robbie 64 weeks agou have some skill!
poems i really liked your poems and the only reason i have given you 3 stars is because i couldnt get into them and couldnt really find a flow! if you write anymore poems please let me know and i will re rate because i wud love 2 give u 4 stars.
by Rasta- G -Man 66 weeks agoif you wud like 2 check out my poems visit http://www.bebo.com/rasta-g
thankyou and keep writing
poem your peoms are great
by Sarah Thomson 74 weeks agoyour can tell that some of them comes from the heart they have got feelings
i write peoms aswell
keep going and you can make a book of them
i can see it i wish i could give 3 and a half stars, but i can't sorry. Iliked the poems, but i didn't love them. I'm gonna become a fan because the poems have real promise, so that when you add more i can maybe make it 4 or 5 out of 5 stars.
by Only Unwin. 78 weeks agoVocab and flow could use a look
but otherwise very good standard
xx
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sweet hey... nice poems. i like ur style of writing. keep it up, n go for ur dream
by Thomas Crichton 83 weeks agocheck mine out if u want. www.bebo.com/simplequestion
let me know what u think
thanks xx