LOUIS POEMS
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- louis
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Death At War
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Love
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I Love You
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The Pain Of Love
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Suicide
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The Death Of The Rabbit
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A War In The Trenches
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A Poem From Hayley (Fallen Angel)
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Abused By Him
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Why Do We Create Wars??...
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A Bloody Suicide
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My Friend
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Mental Metal Mayhem106 weeks agonice poems some hav a powerful meaning. thats the kinda poems i like to read good work
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Ally Idol134 weeks agoI agree
hey cud u review mine.................nd be honest lol
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Darcy Loves Yuric135 weeks agosome gud work in there
wow!! this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by Reney 31 weeks agoVery good I really liked your poems. Especially about the soldiers and war, I always thought that wars were completely useless and solve nothing while loosing lives and hurting people aswell. I also liked your last line in bloody suicide. So true. Keep up the writing!!!!
by Catriona M 117 weeks agoi think they get right to the point^^ there great im happy thta people still like to right about there feelings it opens the doors to the soul^^
by Shadow-Firewing 123 weeks agoPersonal Opinion In short, its great
, I noticed its all rhymes shceme, might want to try other types, such as freeverse, or haiku, but over all its great and powerful description.
by Cinder Wolf 123 weeks agopoems sweet
by Lewis Nuttall 131 weeks agoXxX tis really gud but maybe concentrate on ur grammar
by Ally Idol 134 weeks agoand maybe rhyme or length of the lines too
but I really liked the message
rly gud
4 stars 4 ur poetry keep writin sum gd work
by Darcy Loves Yuric 135 weeks ago