LOUIS POEMS
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- Profil utworzony: April 2007
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Death At War
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Love
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I Love You
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The Pain Of Love
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Suicide
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The Death Of The Rabbit
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A War In The Trenches
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A Poem From Hayley (Fallen Angel)
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Abused By Him
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Why Do We Create Wars??...
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A Bloody Suicide
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My Friend
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Mental Metal Mayhem109 tygodni temunice poems some hav a powerful meaning. thats the kinda poems i like to read good work
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Ally. P.Y.T137 tygodni temuI agree
hey cud u review mine.................nd be honest lol
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Darcy Loves Yuric138 tygodni temusome gud work in there















wow!! this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
przez Reney 33 tygodnie temuVery good I really liked your poems. Especially about the soldiers and war, I always thought that wars were completely useless and solve nothing while loosing lives and hurting people aswell. I also liked your last line in bloody suicide. So true. Keep up the writing!!!!
przez Catriona M 119 tygodni temui think they get right to the point^^ there great im happy thta people still like to right about there feelings it opens the doors to the soul^^
przez Shadow-Firewing 126 tygodni temuPersonal Opinion In short, its great
, I noticed its all rhymes shceme, might want to try other types, such as freeverse, or haiku, but over all its great and powerful description.
przez Cinder Wolf 126 tygodni temupoems sweet
przez Lewis Nuttall 134 tygodnie temuXxX tis really gud but maybe concentrate on ur grammar
przez Ally. P.Y.T 137 tygodni temuand maybe rhyme or length of the lines too
but I really liked the message
rly gud
4 stars 4 ur poetry keep writin sum gd work
przez Darcy Loves Yuric 138 tygodni temu