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| it is some poetry i thought up and i decided to publish onto bebo for other people to rate and read and maybe even use (not likely) LOUIS POEMS says: "please read my poetry..." (87 weeks ago) me too! | Reply | Category Poetry Publisher louis URL http://www.bebo.com/louis-poems Profile Created April 2007 Profile Views 167 times | |||||||
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wow!! this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by Rena 11 weeks agoNeeds work .
by Girth 69 weeks agoVery good I really liked your poems. Especially about the soldiers and war, I always thought that wars were completely useless and solve nothing while loosing lives and hurting people aswell. I also liked your last line in bloody suicide. So true. Keep up the writing!!!!
by Catriona M 97 weeks agoi think they get right to the point^^ there great im happy thta people still like to right about there feelings it opens the doors to the soul^^
by Shadow-Firewing 104 weeks agoPersonal Opinion In short, its great
, I noticed its all rhymes shceme, might want to try other types, such as freeverse, or haiku, but over all its great and powerful description.
by Cinder Wolf 104 weeks agopoems sweet
by Lewis Nuttall 112 weeks agoXxX tis really gud but maybe concentrate on ur grammar
by Ally. 115 weeks agoand maybe rhyme or length of the lines too
but I really liked the message
rly gud
4 stars 4 ur poetry keep writin sum gd work
by Darcy Loves Yuric 116 weeks ago