LOUIS POEMS

please read my poetry...

109 tygodni temu | ja też! | Odpowiedz

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O mnie

Ja, o mnie i jeszcze raz ja: it is some poetry i thought up and i decided to publish onto bebo for other people to rate and read and maybe even use (not likely)

PLEASE R8 MOI AND LEAVE A COMMENT!!...

wow!! this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

przez Reney 33 tygodnie temu
Very good I really liked your poems. Especially about the soldiers and war, I always thought that wars were completely useless and solve nothing while loosing lives and hurting people aswell. I also liked your last line in bloody suicide. So true. Keep up the writing!!!!
przez Catriona M 119 tygodni temu
i think they get right to the point^^ there great im happy thta people still like to right about there feelings it opens the doors to the soul^^
przez Shadow-Firewing 126 tygodni temu
Personal Opinion In short, its great , I noticed its all rhymes shceme, might want to try other types, such as freeverse, or haiku, but over all its great and powerful description.
przez Cinder Wolf 126 tygodni temu
poems sweet
przez Lewis Nuttall 134 tygodnie temu
XxX tis really gud but maybe concentrate on ur grammar
and maybe rhyme or length of the lines too

but I really liked the message

rly gud
przez Ally. P.Y.T 137 tygodni temu
4 stars 4 ur poetry keep writin sum gd work
przez Darcy Loves Yuric 138 tygodni temu

Mental Metal Mayhem
nice poems some hav a powerful meaning. thats the kinda poems i like to read good work

109 tygodni temu
Ally. P.Y.T
I agree

hey cud u review mine.................nd be honest lol

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137 tygodni temu
Darcy Loves Yuric
some gud work in there

138 tygodni temu