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- Poetry from the Eyes of An Adult With ADHD, more research should be put into Diagnosis
- Me, Myself, and I
- Hello there and welcome to my Authors Page, my book is titled Life In Poetry Motion (Authors Cut).
It is mainly about Life,how I, an ADHD suferer views the world,
I was not diagnosed with this condition untl I was twentyfour basically not being able to concentrate on certain tasks and being put off as the lazy child.
There is very little known about Adulthood ADHD, It is even still quite hard to get children diagnosed to. I would like to Dedicate this book to people who suffer from ADHD, Personality Disorder's or any Co-morbid Disorders.
I have self published a few copys of Life In Poetry Motion, but was not sure if there would be a demand for them.
I had an offer to get ny book published but the company wanted thousands from me.
Look out for my Poem Yellow in the shade that is due to be out in a book called Majestic minds with various other Poets works.
My aim is to atleast get in third place on the Bebo Authors Chart.
Tell your friends about my book please.
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F-U-C-K IT!
Want to be it?
Don't know how to do it?
Just tell it
Like it is.
Only you can do it.
If it's from the heart,
It's a start.
If they don't like it,
Hey, no sweat,
Never mind.
F-U-C-K IT!
Life's too short
to waste time on idiots.
Bigots
Who criticize all the time.
Anal retentive!
Everything's relative.
Profanity, Vulgarity,
Telling, spelling,
Subject, reject,
Hey lighten up, baby!
This is poetry!
It's free,
Meant to be,
Not to please.
So tell them,
Like me:
F-U-C-K IT!
You're in love.
Happens to the best of us.
When it works,
It's bliss.
If not,
It hurts.
Can't miss.
And worse,
It's really hard
To say
F-U-C-K IT!
Life seems vain.
You're in pain.
Want to open veins.
Get run over by a train.
Blow your brains.
Don't think I don't know it.
I get it.
I've been there before.
Sometimes life's a bitch.
This is how I got out of it.
I told myself
'They won't get me,
F-U-C-K IT! '
Chances are,
If your reading this,
You got curious
And couldn't resist.
A word has only the power you give it.
So don't hate me for using it.
Blame yourselves if you fell for it.
Then again,
F-U-C-K IT!
You don't like me personally?
Maybe?
That's it isn't it?
Well That's too bad, baby.
Because you know
That with a shrug
I'll have the excuse I need
To repeat myself,
One more time,
You guessed it:
F-U-C-K IT!
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F-U-C-K I-T ! *WARNING: S O M E readers may find the following offensive. Contains the F*** 12/05/08
Want to be it?
Don't know how to do it?
Just tell it
Like it is.
Only you can do it.
If it's from the heart,
It's a start.
If they don't like it,
Hey, no sweat,
Never mind.
F-U-C-K IT!
Life's too short
to waste time on idiots.
Bigots
Who criticize all the time.
Anal retentive!
Everything's relative.
Profanity, Vulgarity,
Telling, spelling,
Subject, reject,
Hey lighten up, baby!
This is poetry!
It's free,
Meant to be,
Not to please.
So tell them,
Like me:
F-U-C-K IT!
You're in love.
Happens to the best of us.
When it works,
It's bliss.
If not,
It hurts.
Can't miss.
And worse,
It's really hard
To say
F-U-C-K IT!
Life seems vain.
You're in pain.
Want to open veins.
Get run over by a train.
Blow your brains.
Don't think I don't know it.
I get it.
I've been there before.
Sometimes life's a bitch.
This is how I got out of it.
I told myself
'They won't get me,
F-U-C-K IT! '
Chances are,
If your reading this,
You got curious
And couldn't resist.
A word has only the power you give it.
So don't hate me for using it.
Blame yourselves if you fell for it.
Then again,
F-U-C-K IT!
You don't like me personally?
Maybe?
That's it isn't it?
Well That's too bad, baby.
Because you know
That with a shrug
I'll have the excuse I need
To repeat myself,
One more time,
You guessed it:
F-U-C-K IT!
1 Comment 106 weeks
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Hi
Well it's been a while and the Poetry has kind of been thrown out the window since I move to Torry! Looking over my blog some are good and some are crap. I have decided to start writing again not as much as before but more for leisure, excuse my punctuation also.
Here are some of my latest poems and favourates,
Marty0 Comments 106 weeks
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Goldilocks
What porridge does she eat?
Whose bed does she prefer?
Stay tuned.
Goldilocks, Rapunzel, Jean Harlow
(the "blonde bombshell" -- ever
heard of a "brunette bonbshell?"),
Marilyn Monroe, Blondie, Lana Turner,
Jane Mansfield, filmy blondes
with perfect fantasy faces in
coffins, looking natural
like angels
(angels are painted as blondes too
only sleeping) blondes
for beaches, CD covers, ads,
videos, posters, a blonde
for every occasion, a blonde
getting fucked on Channel 69
and screaming for more, make sure
we see her hair, eyes, lips,
his aren't important, a blonde
raped then laughed at by police
because, you know, blondes are
dumb, they're funny, can't take
what they say seriously,
the officer wanting to fuck her
himself after the paperwork's over,
and his desk is
clear, the speechless blonde who can't
pick the staple out of her navel,
some things go too deep, don't
show up in the photographer's
negatives, don't make probing
questions for an anchorman, bring
on the next blonde, make her smile,
see, she looks just like Goldilocks,
ask her
does she want to make it big?
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Orma MooreDec 21Hello, just browsing and came across your page. Read some of your story. Must have been hard for you as a kid.
But hey, you are so talented, adhd hasn't stopped you from living. Hope you're well. That's me down there, I'm in disguise!
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Randy Sturridge
I sir have ADHD as well and I have had quite the experience in dealing with it. There are much more involved the what is generally said. My website is centralized around what I am know through poetry that is. http://www.peculiarpoeticpoetry.blog... The Mind Canvas
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Tear3/5/11Hi I love your page, work and cause its great to be able to realate to others words and expierences. I have a page myself and suffer with mental health problems which a lot of my poetry is based on. I would love to have a chat with you for many reasons, advice and tips. My poems are on http://www.bebo.com/tearseyes I hope to hear from you Tear xxx
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Shahjamalwelfaresociety1/20/11i m saying poetry in urdu,nd want to read yours poem thx
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Ahmd8/10/10http://ia331411.us.archive.org/3/ite... Allah, CREATED THE UNIVERSE FROM NOTHING http://allah-created-the-universe.bl... THE COLLAPSE OF THE THEORY OF EVOLUTION IN 20 QUESTIONS http://newaninvitationtothetruth.blo... ((( Acquainted With Islam ))) http://aslam-ahmd.blogspot.com/ http://acquaintedwithislam.maktoobbl...
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Author Sonia P. Myers5/12/10Remove the f word off my page asap like now
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.Bounceonit3/10/10i love your poems i felt i could relate to them
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Corinne Staten Cullen Salvatore2/19/10great job loved it http://www.bebo.com/ilmbf16 its about a girl,her best guy friend(who loves her),her best girl friend,her crush, her stalker, and a bitchy girl. It all goes down at a drunken party one night!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Check it out
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life1/13/10
some really good stuff! well done! iv started writing some poetry, please come check it out http://www.bebo.com/2poems and give me yer opinions! thx!
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Photographer Rachel Card12/16/09Great work, really wonderful. You may just have managed to alter my oppinion on poetry. Also, apologies for advertising, feel free to check out my recent book page of 'The Provalien'. Though I do warn, sex and strong language are included in the two chapter extracts so I insist on parental permission if you are under the age of 16. http://www.bebo.com/Profile.jsp?Memb... Regards R.L.Card
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Eileen Coffey11/22/09wow your poems are amazing.
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Dr. Steve W11/15/09I am an Adult with ADHD and was able to self-medicate for years. However, after deciding that my life was on a dangerous path, I chose to seek medical help. My current meds are for anxiety/depression and they sorta work. Make me a friend and we can share stories. Also known as Furry Freak Bro
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Alan Fagan10/18/09i also write poems check out my page alone is the first in a book of 26. i titled my book, A personal view of life in verse.everybody is welcome to view.
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www.bebo.com/Profile.jsp?MemberId=78... please visit my page... no one has because i havent properly advertised myself. Its called 'brotherly love.' give it a chance. =]
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Heyy sorry to advertise, can you plase read my stuff? When Aidan begins to have prophetic visions she is scared she is going insane. But she's not. She's a medium, and her visions are all circling around one topic. But all is not well. Aidan will discover a brutal truth. The race is on to stop the deaths of 4 more girls. Can Aidan change her visions or is fate an unstopable force? Thanks K .
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great stuff wasnt sure how this would work in poetry but you've made a great job and am sure folk will be less ignorant towards adhd after reading your work id appreciate if you checked out my page. kaz x www.bebo.com/spaceforheads
by Kaz 4/4/10I'll be recomending it! Not a huge fan of poetry myself, but this stuff is pretty good! Fabulous work! I'll be recommending it.
by Photographer Rachel Card 12/16/09Also, apologies for advertising, feel free to check out my recent book page of 'The Provalien'. Though I do warn, sex and strong language are included in the two chapter extracts so I insist on parental permission if you are under the age of 16.
http://www.bebo.com/Profile.jsp?Memb...
Regards
R.L.Card
'Excellent!' These poems are unique, abstract and different to conventual poems which makes this collection stand out.
by Thirty Three Percent Better Kid 12/6/09Evangelical Angel Evangelical Angel was very touching;
by Philos5585 9/28/09I'm Liking it ~~ Just read some of your poems randomly. I really liked it - seems to come from a very personal place somewhere from deep within. Keep up this work and pursue it - I think you're onto something.
by Eileen Woodside 9/25/09Just my amateur 2 cents ~~
Please read my work... Sometimes your own intuition is nothing more than a farcical game,
by Findmeon Facebook 9/5/09and believing your own thoughts and feelings could be named one solitary name,
like emotional or wrong there’s not one word to describe it,
like letting you heart go or creating the path that you’re riding,
or maybe it’s a sign of weakness when times are supposedly tough,
“buck up your ideas, son, life is inevitably rough”,
I have that same dream that most humans on planet earth do,
I just don’t know how to dodge the stock or get myself dragged through,
my mainspring is one that most people have inside,
It’s of a suitable nature to share worldwide,
It’s not a goal or a target or an object in reach,
nor a time or a place or a part of a speech,
It’s a strong mind and heart to know what needs done
and with this in mind I pick up this gun...
pure. this is pure...so true so nice...i can feel this..thank you for such a wonderful read.
by Lysha Fray 8/28/09just sumthing i like tu share;) poetry
by Dene PrYde 8/2/09They could never understand what u set out 2 do instead they chose 2 ridicule u when u get weak they loved tha sight of your dimming and flickering starlight How could they understand what was so intricate 2 be loved by so many, so intimately wanted 2 c your lifeless corpse this way u could not alter the course of ignorance that they have set 2 make my people forget what they have done for much 2 long 2 just forget and carry on I had loved u forever because of who u r and now I mourn our fallen star
So Much Pain wow i really like that one it is amazing if i only i could do that i would love to be able to not hide away from everythink. it would be soo perfect. I have a place i hide and it's inside my head i call it my happy place nobody else has entered there yet but i'm trying to make that step to let the people i love inside it.
by The Freak From Your WorstNightmare 7/5/09cool page deep.
by Withmyheartonmysleeve 6/24/09