Real GudI hav 2 say ur story is one of the better ones i've seen. You got a gud idea dat's original nd I'd run wit it until it's finished. Hope u ad more chapters!!! I tink u do a gud job of showing how much Miranda and Daniel hate each other, i can feel de antagonism!
P.S. d'ya tink u cud gime ur opinion on my buk, hav it on my blog.