LOUIS POEMS
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- Poésie
- Éditeur:
- louis
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Death At War
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Love
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I Love You
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The Pain Of Love
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Suicide
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The Death Of The Rabbit
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A War In The Trenches
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A Poem From Hayley (Fallen Angel)
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Abused By Him
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Why Do We Create Wars??...
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A Bloody Suicide
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My Friend
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Mental Metal MayhemIl y a 108 semainesnice poems some hav a powerful meaning. thats the kinda poems i like to read good work
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Ally IdolIl y a 135 semainesI agree
hey cud u review mine.................nd be honest lol
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Darcy Loves YuricIl y a 136 semainessome gud work in there






























wow!! this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
par Reney Il y a 32 semainesVery good I really liked your poems. Especially about the soldiers and war, I always thought that wars were completely useless and solve nothing while loosing lives and hurting people aswell. I also liked your last line in bloody suicide. So true. Keep up the writing!!!!
par Catriona M Il y a 118 semainesi think they get right to the point^^ there great im happy thta people still like to right about there feelings it opens the doors to the soul^^
par Shadow-Firewing Il y a 125 semainesPersonal Opinion In short, its great
, I noticed its all rhymes shceme, might want to try other types, such as freeverse, or haiku, but over all its great and powerful description.
par Cinder Wolf Il y a 125 semainespoems sweet
par Lewis Nuttall Il y a 133 semainesXxX tis really gud but maybe concentrate on ur grammar
par Ally Idol Il y a 135 semainesand maybe rhyme or length of the lines too
but I really liked the message
rly gud
4 stars 4 ur poetry keep writin sum gd work
par Darcy Loves Yuric Il y a 136 semaines