LOUIS POEMS

please read my poetry...

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À propos de moi

À propos de moi: it is some poetry i thought up and i decided to publish onto bebo for other people to rate and read and maybe even use (not likely)

PLEASE R8 MOI AND LEAVE A COMMENT!!...

wow!! this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

par Reney Il y a 32 semaines
Very good I really liked your poems. Especially about the soldiers and war, I always thought that wars were completely useless and solve nothing while loosing lives and hurting people aswell. I also liked your last line in bloody suicide. So true. Keep up the writing!!!!
par Catriona M Il y a 118 semaines
i think they get right to the point^^ there great im happy thta people still like to right about there feelings it opens the doors to the soul^^
par Shadow-Firewing Il y a 125 semaines
Personal Opinion In short, its great , I noticed its all rhymes shceme, might want to try other types, such as freeverse, or haiku, but over all its great and powerful description.
par Cinder Wolf Il y a 125 semaines
poems sweet
par Lewis Nuttall Il y a 133 semaines
XxX tis really gud but maybe concentrate on ur grammar
and maybe rhyme or length of the lines too

but I really liked the message

rly gud
par Ally Idol Il y a 135 semaines
4 stars 4 ur poetry keep writin sum gd work
par Darcy Loves Yuric Il y a 136 semaines

Mental Metal Mayhem
nice poems some hav a powerful meaning. thats the kinda poems i like to read good work

Il y a 108 semaines
Ally Idol
I agree

hey cud u review mine.................nd be honest lol

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Il y a 135 semaines
Darcy Loves Yuric
some gud work in there

Il y a 136 semaines