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To look in my eyes is to look in my Heart

er.... hi?

10/28/07 | me too! | Reply

To look in my eyes is to look in my Heart
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Poetry

About Me

Me, Myself, and I
This is all the poetry I’ve ever written and I would like to share it so I hope you enjoy it and because I’m rubbish at spelling if anyone sees a mistake please let me no.

I am publishing this in hope of finding other people who are influenced by words and share my passion.


Thank you.

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  • heya fans!

    I'm writing this blog to thank all my fans for there support. thank you to all for the positive feedback and I hope you all find this kind of passion for ur own work or hobbies.

    thanks again.

    feel free to write to me on my bebo page.

    :)

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1 ICE 2 what she took from me! 3 I like to watch you sleep 4 Shadow---- (I GOTS THIS ONE PUBLISHED ON YEA!) 5 dance with me 6 hatred blocks the sense 7 the moonlit dancefloor

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  • David Adamson
    David Adamson

    oh it makes sense now but what you mean by second name like in my case david harold adamson the second being harold or adamson? seemed like a beautiful setting apart from the drunken guy (well you could put a box on top of him then it would be pretty good):D

    10/27/07
  • David Adamson
    David Adamson

    got a little confused with chapter7 but i'm really not the poetry type but i'm not much of a type either lol:D i didn't really understand it well but i would probably like it more if i knew what was goin on :P

    10/26/07
  • Carolyn
    Carolyn

    Luvin ur poems kirsty..they're very gud! alot of feeling went into them..v.v gud!:D xxx

    7/4/07
  • Kay Edwards
    Kay Edwards

    its great to hear from u all. i havent looked at this page in ages so im sorry i was late replying. :)

    7/1/07
  • Lolina Avia
    Lolina Avia

    Hi :) Just to let you know that I really liked your Shadow poem. It's really good. I haven't written poetry for about 14yrs now and it's great to see that people out there are still doing it. Love your work :) :)

    6/10/07
  • Fred
    Fred

    I luv your poems especially I like to Watch you sleep, it was my favourite:D

    4/28/07
  • Paul Carroll
    Paul Carroll

    Greetings fellow writer. My name is Paul Carroll. I am the lead administrator of a new group on Bebo known as Literary Mania. Authors and readers alike are welcome to join and I ask that you too will join us and encourage others to join as well. The URL can be found below. Also, if/when you decide to join, I ask that you add me to your friends list in order to receive the weekly newsletter from me. It is sent in the mail section on Saturdays. Thank you for your time. Let fate be your destination, but be your own guide. Paul Carroll. http://literary-mania.bebo.com

    4/28/07