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hey i loved your poems..x

i've become a fan and id love it if you looked at mine sometime, tell me what you think..

thanx..x

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nice poetry

It is just that disease which is still unconceived
By the brightest of you
Too much love to give, it is turning on me
The fruit of the harvest left unpicked
Rotting on the vines as the days draw darker
Only to be pecked, pulled and to fall
Fall down to the cool moist ground
Fall down never to be found

The skies awake from their slumber
Eyes widening and enlighting
From the mist, the arms of change embrace the Earth
Stealing her from darkness and depths so cold
Sensations familiar, seep and hold
I can feel within reaching for the gold
Breaking the shell of what use to be known
Escaping the depths and darkness which held
Finding the light of all which once shone
Escaping the roots of one which had grown
Escaping the past, the falling, the cold
Growing much higher, chasing the blue
Bearing all that captures the soul
Only to be picked and crushed
Drained and sold
Sipped from the Holy Grail.

YOUR TALENT IS UNBELEIVABLE AND YOUR WORK IS SO TRUE I CANT BELEIVE HOW GOOD IT IS

SOMEDAY SOON YOUR GONNA MAKE A BOOK AND ITS GONNA BE A BEST SELLER BEACAUSE A PUBLISHER WOULD BE DAFT TO TURN YOUR WORK DOWN

your poetry is amazing
i had to stop and stare
coz wen i read ur poems
i saw parts of my life there.

no 1s life is perfect
sum people are meant 2 feel pain
but time is a healer
and we heal ourselves again.

well done for winning the award
ur talent is great by far
and if u ever need a friend
i dont mind hearing the sadness of ur heart.

heya havent talked to 4 a while ia wb

Hey there! I love your style and honesty. Reading your writings reminds me of my own, deep, vunerable and real. Keep it up! Check out mine if you are interested!

your poetry has a very beautiful style about it, it has alot of soul n alot of talent put into it keep up the wonderful poetry

Your poetry is beautiful, very soul searching, you have a great talent, i hope to read more from you in the future
Jules

I'd just like to say that my poem 'together they dance' is actually an award winning poem and my artistic talent has been reconised by astablished poets in the US, i didnt actualy recive the awards mind cuz i cant fly down there =/ however it has been published which i am very please about, and hopefully when i've collected together enough of my poems the best will be published in a book of my work, so keep a look out in the future for my name =] cuz i rawk!
...i just gota stop writing teen angst poetry n start writing poetry people will actually pay to read =/

thank yoo m'dear ^-^

heya, ur poetrys deep for sum reason (wonder y lol) anyways nice syt

pleased with Aqua tomb, latest poem, and i'm in the middle of writin another...