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The best advice given to me:
"Fuck these chains, no god damn slave!"
Machine head - imperium


poetry - the most personal and real thing to me,
you should feel privileged to have free acsess to it.


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"I want you to WANT to read it, but i dont actually want you reading it" (66 weeks ago) me too! | Reply
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  • My guarded secret

    Pushing them all away
    pulling you closer
    at the same time pulling myself back
    Is eternity too much to ask for..
    demanding without warning
    i'll stop,
    reload and continue to cry, theres no walking away now
    i built my own box, its cold and empty
    i'm chlostrophobic in here but you're out there
    staggering into submission
    secluded
    i cant go on but what choice do i have?

    1 Comment 5 days

  • Affiliations with a squid

    Sweetly torture me
    tendrills and tentecles unfurled with furey, with passion
    cruelty deforms open minds
    laid out, knocked down
    preassure giving way to pain and pain into pleasure
    denay me any armour, leave me fragile
    i'll crummble beneath your gaze

    carry me "down to join the dead men"
    still limbs ascend our ambitions
    in the deep throb of raging silence

    the bitter laugh at a serious situation
    i dont do subtle.

    0 Comments 41 days

  • Bed of regret

    Self desolation the father of destruction.

    Stallions of waves which burn me like
    the darkest chaos illuminating whispers,
    promises.

    Mutilation comes to mind, only temporary escape,

    but friendly sin, oh incubus!

    The streangth of decay, creation killing blight.
    Its womb suffocating,
    tears of laughter chilling bones.

    0 Comments 73 days

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  • straight from my soul...my poems
    straight from my soul...my poems

    hey i loved your poems..x

    i've become a fan and id love it if you looked at mine sometime, tell me what you think..

    thanx..x

    ..x..x..x..

    37 weeks ago
  • Noise
    Noise

    GET YOUR POETRY OUT THERE!

    Are you 25 or under and want an international stage to showcase you music?

    NOISE Festival 2008, the Europe-wide media showcase for young creative people aged 25 and under is NOW open for submissions. NOISE is a not-for-profit organisation which helps young people with talent, gain opportunities in the Creative Industries, so it is free for you to take part! Simply head to www.NOISEfestival.com click the registration button, create a profile and upload your work!

    So if you’re a bedroom genius and want to get recognition for your talent, you can submit up to 6 pieces of work to NOISE Festival 2008 now! Simply head to www.NOISEfestival.com create a profile and upload your work, and the best thing is it's absolutely free to take part!

    Well, what are you waiting for?!

    45 weeks ago
  • SyphiLis
    SyphiLis

    if you spam on my site i'll hunt you down and pour super glue on your feet so you're stuck to the road then make rabid hamsters rape your face!!

    51 weeks ago
  • ARtistic
    ARtistic

    nice poetry

    66 weeks ago
  • Kerry G
    Kerry G

    It is just that disease which is still unconceived
    By the brightest of you
    Too much love to give, it is turning on me
    The fruit of the harvest left unpicked
    Rotting on the vines as the days draw darker
    Only to be pecked, pulled and to fall
    Fall down to the cool moist ground
    Fall down never to be found

    The skies awake from their slumber
    Eyes widening and enlighting
    From the mist, the arms of change embrace the Earth
    Stealing her from darkness and depths so cold
    Sensations familiar, seep and hold
    I can feel within reaching for the gold
    Breaking the shell of what use to be known
    Escaping the depths and darkness which held
    Finding the light of all which once shone
    Escaping the roots of one which had grown
    Escaping the past, the falling, the cold
    Growing much higher, chasing the blue
    Bearing all that captures the soul
    Only to be picked and crushed
    Drained and sold
    Sipped from the Holy Grail.

    88 weeks ago
  • Addicted To Star Wars
    Addicted To Star Wars

    YOUR TALENT IS UNBELEIVABLE AND YOUR WORK IS SO TRUE I CANT BELEIVE HOW GOOD IT IS

    SOMEDAY SOON YOUR GONNA MAKE A BOOK AND ITS GONNA BE A BEST SELLER BEACAUSE A PUBLISHER WOULD BE DAFT TO TURN YOUR WORK DOWN


    90 weeks ago
  • Amanda
    luv Amanda

    your poetry is amazing
    i had to stop and stare
    coz wen i read ur poems
    i saw parts of my life there.

    no 1s life is perfect
    sum people are meant 2 feel pain
    but time is a healer
    and we heal ourselves again.

    well done for winning the award
    ur talent is great by far
    and if u ever need a friend
    i dont mind hearing the sadness of ur heart.

    90 weeks ago
  • John H
    John H

    heya havent talked to 4 a while ia wb

    92 weeks ago
  • Kerry G
    Kerry G

    Hey there! I love your style and honesty. Reading your writings reminds me of my own, deep, vunerable and real. Keep it up! Check out mine if you are interested!

    97 weeks ago
  • Redeyez
    luv Redeyez

    your poetry has a very beautiful style about it, it has alot of soul n alot of talent put into it keep up the wonderful poetry

    97 weeks ago
  • Julie E
    luv Julie E

    Your poetry is beautiful, very soul searching, you have a great talent, i hope to read more from you in the future
    Jules :)

    98 weeks ago
  • SyphiLis
    SyphiLis

    I'd just like to say that my poem 'together they dance' is actually an award winning poem and my artistic talent has been reconised by astablished poets in the US, i didnt actualy recive the awards mind cuz i cant fly down there =/ however it has been published which i am very please about, and hopefully when i've collected together enough of my poems the best will be published in a book of my work, so keep a look out in the future for my name =] cuz i rawk!
    ...i just gota stop writing teen angst poetry n start writing poetry people will actually pay to read =/

    103 weeks ago
  • SyphiLis
    SyphiLis

    thank yoo m'dear ^-^

    106 weeks ago
  • Jordan Canavan
    luv Jordan Canavan

    heya, ur poetrys deep for sum reason (wonder y lol) anyways nice syt

    107 weeks ago
  • SyphiLis
    SyphiLis

    pleased with Aqua tomb, latest poem, and i'm in the middle of writin another...

    108 weeks ago