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These are a collection of poems i have written over the years, they are mostley recent poems, they started off as a way to express myself until i decided to share them with the outside world so people could see what it is going on inside my head.

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"I want you to WANT to read it, but i dont actually want you reading it" (22 weeks ago) me too!

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4. i dont like it, not my thing! =[
5. i hate it, its crap!! |=[[
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After the sword strikes
I'm falling into the sky, gravety has forsaken me. The golden orb grows bigger before my eyes until at last i'm surrounded by light. My senses dulled, i'm weightless. A thousand arms embrace me, or so it feels. Immersed in tranquility as i spend eternity gazing at the stars
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Drowning lessons
Shallow words come from shallow thoughts but not so shallow are the pools of writing which drench the desk. Careful not to slip on my ideas. Shivering slightly, overwhelmed by a vast paper lake. If i sink to the bottom would there be someone to rescue me? or would you stand on the banks of reason and say you saw it comming. The ink soaks in, waiting for it to dry like waiting for the tide to go out so more can be written upon the sand, even if its never seen, the meaning is clear striking purpose in my life. For a brief time i hold my breath, everything slows and the eeri calmness consumes my body. I'll never dry out.
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And then....i woke up
I woke up for the first time, this wont be the last time, that i open up my eyes and see you for who you really are, rather than what i want you to be. I've made some mistakes, but i'm only as human as i believe. Its going to take my heart to make this work. without someone to show me how, i'm loosing myself, without a plan, i'm just fooling myself but i'm moving on. At least i'm moving on.
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1	Forgotton memories
2	Dying embers
3	The clowns
4	Ghosts in the night
5	Internal suicide
6	My truth
7	Thanks for this
8	The clock ticks life away
9	Together they dance
10	The darkness take your soul
11	summer dreams
12	The stillness

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perfect
Holy shit!!! wow, this is good!!! you say exactly what i try to say in my songs... good job!!!
by Brittany Just Ate You	7 weeks ago






Shouldnt smoke!:L
Wahooo 5 stars for effort!
by Patrick Sea	14 weeks ago



UR POEMS
YOUR POEMS ABSOLUTLY ROCK.
by Brunnette.An. Luvun.ItXo	33 weeks ago



put blood to paper
That's it. I'm not writing any more. Why should I, when someone else has already said what I've been trying to shell out my whole damn life? Don't know whether to love your work (this and the last one were superb), or hate you for being the one to write it. Most of my crud turns out as IF written for a younger audience! I keep trying though, which might be the problem. I'd really like to know what you think of mine miss. It's at www.bebo.com/widerthanmine I hope you'll stop by, and that you start another book. Soon. People like you (artists) always have something to say. Please share it.
by Rainman	43 weeks ago

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	Noise GET YOUR POETRY OUT THERE! Are you 25 or under and want an international stage to showcase you music? NOISE Festival 2008, the Europe-wide media showcase for young creative people aged 25 and under is NOW open for submissions. NOISE is a not-for-profit organisation which helps young people with talent, gain opportunities in the Creative Industries, so it is free for you to take part! Simply head to www.NOISEfestival.com click the registration button, create a profile and upload your work! So if you’re a bedroom genius and want to get recognition for your talent, you can submit up to 6 pieces of work to NOISE Festival 2008 now! Simply head to www.NOISEfestival.com create a profile and upload your work, and the best thing is it's absolutely free to take part! Well, what are you waiting for?!
1 week ago



	SiriLis if you spam on my site i'll hunt you down and pour super glue on your feet so you're stuck to the road then make rabid hamsters rape your face!!
7 weeks ago



	Patrick Sea Blue cheese... wwhere can u buy that? xx
14 weeks ago



	Patrick Sea Okay, Cheese is yellow, cheese is mellow, But when cheese is green, Cheese is mean, And if u eat it there'll be something u'll have to clean!
14 weeks ago



	Patrick Sea U should write poems about rainbows, and butterflies and happily ever afters
14 weeks ago



	-BItch Im Jadee'Babe nice poetry
22 weeks ago



	Vampire Love ^^
30 weeks ago



	Vampire Love wow i dont know what to say your poetry is amzing i wish i could write like that i bet you could trun sum of them in to lyrics or make a book i wish you all the luck in the future luv mandy xox
32 weeks ago



	Rainman Hey there, just stopped by to read some of your works again, and 'Put blood to paper' still rocks my socks. I wonder if you read much poetry, miss? I think you'd like maybe Anne Sexton's work, or Sylvia Plath. They both had strong voices, and often wrote out of places of hurt, distrust, or simple human pain; they sometimes wrote "tragic life poetry" too. Wish you'd upload more.
33 weeks ago



	Kerry G It is just that disease which is still unconceived By the brightest of you Too much love to give, it is turning on me The fruit of the harvest left unpicked Rotting on the vines as the days draw darker Only to be pecked, pulled and to fall Fall down to the cool moist ground Fall down never to be found The skies awake from their slumber Eyes widening and enlighting From the mist, the arms of change embrace the Earth Stealing her from darkness and depths so cold Sensations familiar, seep and hold I can feel within reaching for the gold Breaking the shell of what use to be known Escaping the depths and darkness which held Finding the light of all which once shone Escaping the roots of one which had grown Escaping the past, the falling, the cold Growing much higher, chasing the blue Bearing all that captures the soul Only to be picked and crushed Drained and sold Sipped from the Holy Grail.
44 weeks ago



	The Grouch YOUR TALENT IS UNBELEIVABLE AND YOUR WORK IS SO TRUE I CANT BELEIVE HOW GOOD IT IS SOMEDAY SOON YOUR GONNA MAKE A BOOK AND ITS GONNA BE A BEST SELLER BEACAUSE A PUBLISHER WOULD BE DAFT TO TURN YOUR WORK DOWN
45 weeks ago



	Amanda your poetry is amazing i had to stop and stare coz wen i read ur poems i saw parts of my life there. no 1s life is perfect sum people are meant 2 feel pain but time is a healer and we heal ourselves again. well done for winning the award ur talent is great by far and if u ever need a friend i dont mind hearing the sadness of ur heart.
46 weeks ago



	John H heya havent talked to 4 a while ia wb
48 weeks ago



	Kerry G Hey there! I love your style and honesty. Reading your writings reminds me of my own, deep, vunerable and real. Keep it up! Check out mine if you are interested!
53 weeks ago



	Redeyez your poetry has a very beautiful style about it, it has alot of soul n alot of talent put into it keep up the wonderful poetry
53 weeks ago



	Julie E Your poetry is beautiful, very soul searching, you have a great talent, i hope to read more from you in the future Jules
54 weeks ago



	SiriLis I'd just like to say that my poem 'together they dance' is actually an award winning poem and my artistic talent has been reconised by astablished poets in the US, i didnt actualy recive the awards mind cuz i cant fly down there =/ however it has been published which i am very please about, and hopefully when i've collected together enough of my poems the best will be published in a book of my work, so keep a look out in the future for my name =] cuz i rawk! ...i just gota stop writing teen angst poetry n start writing poetry people will actually pay to read =/
59 weeks ago



	SiriLis thank yoo m'dear ^-^
62 weeks ago



	Jordan Canavan heya, ur poetrys deep for sum reason (wonder y lol) anyways nice syt
62 weeks ago



	SiriLis pleased with Aqua tomb, latest poem, and i'm in the middle of writin another...
63 weeks ago

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