Bebo

Plying the devil with gin.... <cubagoldpoetrynmore>

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	A broken bus	437 days ago
	can see it all happening. i want to use some other word than beautiful but...
	posted by Michaela
	Fisherman	612 days ago
	Love it! Well done my lady!! And fair winds, my man, always fair winds../
	posted by Ken Armstrong
	****	633 days ago
	For some reason, this is a bit more difflcult to get lost in than your first page. I don't know what it is - almost like you're not taking it so seriously. Still, it's bloody good!! I liked 'forget me not' and your newspaper rant - - haven't we all felt like that, sometime?? By the way, I'm starting again at my poetry page, www.bebo.com/widerthanmine Be great to know what you think, Jane. See you around.
	posted by Rainman
	excellent	673 days ago
	Thanks very much for your review,it meant alot!Yeah I have thought about writing short stories and there are ideas there but I just havent got around to getting started!I love the one inspired by reading the newpaper!Very relevant.You captured that reaction perfectly!Look forward to reading more.p.s I have just finished my fourth
	posted by Roger Leeroy Parker
	JESSICAS JOURNEY	674 days ago
	well done doll this has got me very hooked and intruiged hurry up wi the next bit
	posted by Shirley Porter
	Review...	677 days ago
	Is there anything you can't do? I forgot to leave a review again, only getting around to it now, sorry. You know what I'm going to say anyway. I love how you write, I love how you play with words, keen to read more of that story by the way and the poems were class as usual. I'm jealous of you yet again
	posted by Claire Connolly
	walking on thin ice and mother love	691 days ago
	this is brilliant, you just keep getin better, mothers love so true to life ,we mums can all relate to this,
	posted by Shirley E
	The Fisherman	691 days ago
	This is excellent. Plain and simple....superb! It speaks volumes. xxx
	posted by Carolyn S
	WELL DONE	691 days ago
	THIS WILL EXPLAIN WHY I DON'T READ NEWSPAPERS ALL THEY DO IS BRING YOU DOWN, WHATEVER HAPPENED TO READING GOOD NEWS?? WELL DONE
	posted by Shazy