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Good Job!11/24/08
 

Read a few of your poetry, good concepts and idea's
Theres good advice in the reviews below... so theres not much for me to say
Depth and fluidity I guess...


Check mine out...
www.bebo.com/puppy-poems
 posted by Puppy Dawgeh 
Impressive2/29/08
 

After reading through a fair few of the poems on this page, gotta say I like what I'm reading. The language is sufficient, spelling is almost completely without error, good use of imagery in places.

The only criticism I can make is that some of it lacks depth, in both content and structure. The content is good but it really only scratches the surface, the best poetry uses the author's deepest feelings to put across a point. Also, some of the longer poems become repetitive, whether this is a deliberate feature or not, I'm unsure - although I'm sure it's all down to personal taste.

Keep writing! I reckon you could go far ^_^

Feel free to have a look at my poetry page if you've got some time on your hands!

http://www.bebo.com/TheVoid--

xox
 posted by Niall 
amazin2/20/08
 

this is amazin!!!!!11
=]
 posted by Sophiee 
Friendly comments2/20/08
 

This poem,
its really moving, i can see where youre comming from,
the words are nice,
and it really paints a picture.
im not too keen on poems that ryhm,
but its good,
keep writting,
its hard to get somewhere with it,
but if you want it,
and you really give it your best,
you never know,
you may be the next big thing.
xx
 posted by Summerboy. 
Awesome!2/19/08
 

Your writing's amazing!
Keep up the good work, I think you could make it as a writer (:

x
 posted by Obi-Wan Cinoley 
Review..11/2/07
 

DEAD GOOD.

Keep It Up, They're All Awesome..

=]
 posted by ' Ellie. 
Miss Pretty Vain11/2/07
 

Wow :O awesome words! Keep it up!
 posted by Heart Of Kaos Designs 
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