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Drumming in the Underground <UndergroundDrumming>

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	Wow!	hace 276 días
	your writing blew me away - this is a really unique and interesting idea, and your writing style is really professional. This book is akin to those I have collected from book shops XD, and I think if you approached a publisher with this you'd have a good chance at getting it published - I'd certainly buy it XD this is not normally my kind of book, personally I prefer the romance category, but your story really drew me in - your characters are really believable. thanks for the review of mine (www.bebo.com/bulldogterritory ) write more soon! xx
	escrita por Holly.
	Your Book.	hace 377 días
	Wow. I hope there's more.
	escrita por New Acc.
	waow!!!!	hace 710 días
	heya!!! wow dat was really cool!! ORIGINAL!!! ya dont c stories lik dat every day!! i really enjoyed it i tot it was real creative , original, an i love da whole music bohiemian ting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! real fab!!!! ray!!!
	escrita por That Raychel Kid
	SWEET	hace 762 días
	its totally awesome
	escrita por Shannen Sykess
	Awesome	hace 807 días
	Your story is just....awesome lol it engaged me from the start everything is perfect in it please finish this story i desperatly want to know what happens its a good mix between sci fi and music and action and adventure i love it i would totally buy this book x] thank you for the enjoyment xxx
	escrita por Craig Chmarny
	Review	hace 826 días
	Some brilliant writing there. I'd advise you to read it out loud to yourself: that way you'll catch both spelling and punctuation mistakes more easily, and find places where the sentence doesn't quite sound right. Also, you don't need to tell the reader the hair colour of every character. Mentioning that their hair is dyed or shaven could indicate a rebel, but past that there's not a lot you can infer from hair colour. Other than that, you've got a great pace going and an excellent plot idea. Good luck with your writing
	escrita por Lauren Gold
	i love it	hace 854 días
	its 01:15 nd ive been reading for the last half hour i have to go to bed now but i dnt want to. its really good like really really. nice one.
	escrita por Poetic Amunition
	Congratulations!	hace 889 días
	Hello my dear buddy Louie I have read the first part, and I truly thought it was genius. For a start, the plot is unique. I doubt this has been done on any similar level before. I love how the idea of the re-educating camps have made an impression, reminds me of History lessons all too much! The way in which you've written this really reflects your ability as a writer as well as a daydreamer, lol. Well done on making such a remarkable story. x
	escrita por Tiina. Ox