LOUIS POEMS <louis-poems>
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 | wow!! | hace 253 días | ||
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  this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | ||||
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| escrita por Reney | ||||
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| Needs work | hace 659 días | ||
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| escrita por Girth | ||||
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| Very good | hace 855 días | ||
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I really liked your poems. Especially about the soldiers and war, I always thought that wars were completely useless and solve nothing while loosing lives and hurting people aswell. I also liked your last line in bloody suicide. So true. Keep up the writing!!!!  | ||||
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| escrita por Catriona M | ||||
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| 5 | hace 874 días | ||
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Wow. They took my breath away. And what do u mean u can't write peoms like I do. Their better than mine. I like the ryming sceme it's the same as mine. Keep writing. Please I didn't relise boy's wrote peoms | ||||
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| escrita por Phantomwillbeleaving | ||||
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| the words of a million | hace 880 días | ||
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 speck no truth , there shall b pain hear no truth, there shall b tears but thy own sins will burn our own ears the words that have meaning are heard beyound the mouth they leave tears to fall and blood to flow hence the bullies words can kill the words of pain and no remorse the mercy is long gone but the angels hear bullies words as a long forgotten song this is the words of millions | ||||
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| escrita por Hayley | ||||
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| i think they get right to the point^^ | hace 902 días | ||
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 there great im happy thta people still like to right about there feelings it opens the doors to the soul^^ | ||||
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| escrita por Shadow-Firewing | ||||
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| Personal Opinion | hace 902 días | ||
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  In short, its great  , I noticed its all rhymes shceme, might want to try other types, such as freeverse, or haiku, but over all its great and powerful description. | ||||
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| escrita por Cinder Wolf | ||||
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| ... | hace 949 días | ||
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you've got some really good, powerful writing in there as someone once said to me, maybe concentrate a little less on the rhyme and more on the meaning but excellent stuff! | ||||
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| escrita por Sleepy Faerie | ||||
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| poems | hace 958 días | ||
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 sweet | ||||
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| escrita por Lewis Nuttall | ||||
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| XxX | hace 976 días | ||
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 tis really gud but maybe concentrate on ur grammar and maybe rhyme or length of the lines too but I really liked the message rly gud | ||||
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| escrita por Ally. | ||||
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