Bebo

the adventures of bling kid and tracksuit kid. <xprincessbeax123>

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	yay	1/17/09
	cuemonakater. is the real word communicator? cause if it is, that is great. plus that 50 cent has a cameo appearance as a guy fighting off some wolves is pretty much the awesome. what a great story.
	posted by You Are
	What?!	7/21/08
	This story makes no sense and the grammer, spelling and punctuation, is, well, non existant! Writing like this is ruining real literature, if you can't be bothered to type out "before" and have to abbreviate it to "b4" then you shouldn't even write stories! I couldn't even read past the first chapter it's that badly written.
	posted by Ayeisha
	..........	2/9/08
	It would be a lot better if you improved your grammar & spelling & didn't rush the story too much. Try using more words than 'he said' or 'she said' and use speech marks (") and commas (,)
	posted by Katie
	Awesome	10/15/07
	Well Done Really Good Story Write More Cause Its Really Good xx
	posted by Lora.
	Utter crap	7/30/07
	It makes no sense you jump to parts of the story too quick like when she goes to spy school she just suddenly goes their!? and against bethanys gang? one sentance and their dead? And the jetpack!? their base is a tree house yet they have a RADAR. And a JETPACK. This is utter shite. More shite than Diohhrea
	posted by Cone
	?	7/28/07
	crap as a ton of burned shit
	posted by Ebony Taylor
	philip rocks	5/5/07
	wel u out dome urself this tim its famas, grosim, and funy well done
	posted by Phillip M
	gd story	4/6/07
	quilty
	posted by Wonderwoman