poems from the heart <poemsfromtheheart>
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 | datz whtz up | Il y a 502 jours | ||
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  i love da poem | ||||
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| posté par Liiviin My Liife | ||||
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| Wellity wellity wellity | Il y a 547 jours | ||
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  Hmmm, I gave you three stars because I did enjoy the poems, but, just in my personal opinion, I'm not a a fan of the dragging lines that stick out in places. I just couldn't get comfortable reading it. Appearance does matter, I'd reserve that weapon of yours for a poem where you want to make the reader feel uneasy. So in all, I liked the poems, just not so much the stucture of some of them. Sure you may aswell give mine a read and let me know what you think. http://www.bebo.com/mehidontreallycare cheers | ||||
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| posté par P | ||||
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| Agreed with below | Il y a 567 jours | ||
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One of the reviews said something about not being able to get into them... I have to agree  Sorry, it's just me. I had trouble finding the flow in a lot of them which made them a little difficult to read.However I did like 'P.S I'l always love you' - well-structured, liked the technique and your use of imagery is very good. I think my main word of advice would be read over them again, make sure they all flow nicely. Apart from that though, very well done!  | ||||
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| posté par Sam Phillips | ||||
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| hey | Il y a 578 jours | ||
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  so umm i read your poems i actually really liked them congratulations and commiseratios was probably the best i think. you made good points only thing is like grammar and spelling but who cares about that?? id like if you took a look at mine and let me know what you think http://www.bebo.com/adaughtersintuition http://www.bebo.com/highandlowpoems thanks =) | ||||
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| posté par Smurphy Lee | ||||
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| Wow | Il y a 602 jours | ||
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 Some of the stuff u have written here is amazing, you have a real talent for expressing yourself. I liked all of them buts 'Facts' is especially good. Check out this if ur killing time, http://www.bebo.com/Fightfeelings Jmz | ||||
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| posté par James H | ||||
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| they're pretty good | Il y a 605 jours | ||
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 the subject ses it all nadine! u have some skill! | ||||
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| posté par Robbie | ||||
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| poems | Il y a 622 jours | ||
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 i really liked your poems and the only reason i have given you 3 stars is because i couldnt get into them and couldnt really find a flow! if you write anymore poems please let me know and i will re rate because i wud love 2 give u 4 stars. if you wud like 2 check out my poems visit http://www.bebo.com/rasta-g thankyou and keep writing | ||||
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| posté par Rasta- G -Man | ||||
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| Great Poems | Il y a 659 jours | ||
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Wow, your poems are really great! I loved 'Facts'. Thanks for visiting our book, it means a lot coming from another poet like us. | ||||
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| posté par Dea B | ||||
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| poem | Il y a 680 jours | ||
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 your peoms are great your can tell that some of them comes from the heart they have got feelings i write peoms aswell keep going and you can make a book of them | ||||
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| posté par Sarah Thomson | ||||
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| i can see it | Il y a 705 jours | ||
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 i wish i could give 3 and a half stars, but i can't sorry. Iliked the poems, but i didn't love them. I'm gonna become a fan because the poems have real promise, so that when you add more i can maybe make it 4 or 5 out of 5 stars. Vocab and flow could use a look  but otherwise very good standard xx http://doesit4me.bebo.com | ||||
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| posté par Only Unwin. | ||||
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