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- FINISHED - Wednesday 29th October 08
- Me, Myself, and I
- Jenny is in love with Sam, however Sam does not feel the same.
This is the story of her struggle through life with a Dad who has cancer & a mother who she feels, does not love her.
[it doesn't say in the story-i wanted to see who would figure it out-but Jenny has an eating disorder. No one did figure it out.]
"His kisses became deeper; like he was pouring all the rage he had felt for me into them. I couldn’t control my breathing, it came out in uneven gasps and I could feel my heart thrumming against my rib cage. Heat flooded through me as I realised what was settled against my thigh. I could feel the sharp little hairs on his face against mine and I was shocked at how much he was making me desire him and his raw manhood. This was my punishment, my sweet, sweet punishment."
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Writing this story.
All the characters are based off people I know.
I could say who but...nah lol.
My aim for Dale was for him to be the sweet Italian who was flawlessly generous in character & impossible not to love.
Sam - Very confused but putting on a hard act. He does not want to be hurt at all & avoids anyone that means so much to him that they could hurt him.
Jenny - A tortured soul who just does not have the world on her side. Unrequited love is her best friend. It also tears her apart.
Lucy - A complete possesive bitch tbh, who doesn't give a shit about anyone but herself.
Fiona - Based on my one true best friend who I have lost due to change. But her character in this is to be that girl I once knew I guess.
My Mother's character, Fathers, Half-brother & sister & Step-fathers characters are made up.
I spend quite some time writing this. The only time I write is at night.
I've never really written anything like this before. As in, describing pain in a metaphorical sense. So I'm not sure whether I'm making such a good job of it tbh.
All opinions are appreachiated, as long as they're realistic.
If you say my work is complete and utter bolix for instance.
I know it's not.
As big-headed as that sounds.
I've seen complete & utter bolix, written by people older than me, & this my lovelies, is no where near as shit.
But anyhoo, have fun reading lak!
P.S. The sweet melodies of Sarah McLaughlan accompanied me alot whilst writing this.
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Bebo Request Reviews4/16/09NOT SPAMMING! Would you like an unbiased constructive review? I'm willing to do so (for this or any other books you may have written) I love reading and just want to help other people improve their own writing If you do please click on the link above and I'll do it within the week By accepting my offer I would write a review on your page and also copy the review to my own blog (along with the link to here of course) Thanks for reading this
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9/27/08
Mooza
i dont know what tosay or do amazing story ilove love love extra love it iwish that ican write like you :p waiting for the new chapter here is my love
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You Are9/23/08Huh! I didnt see your comment before I wrote that response. It's twelve thrity seven now and my head hurts from staring at the screen, but it's done. Now I see you are from Ireland, sorry I assumed it was England once I read the A-levels thing. Is it weird that I regard you as a friend even though you probably hate me? I guess so. Anyway goodnight.
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XoxRequiem Faeriexox9/21/08ND BTW THE NEW CHAPTER WAS GR8!!
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9/21/08
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hey thanx 4 taking the time 2 actually like u knw cum on mi page nd thank me bt i didnt say anything that wasnt true so keep on going ur a gr8 writer x
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9/21/08
Baby Peach
hey guys, what's up? Moonlight Hill's phil here this story seems interesting, and i'll get around to reading it once all my homework's finished, one week of school left anyway in the meantime it'd be great to see more people reading Moonlight Hill www.bebo.com/moonlight-hill i apologise for the lack of recent updates, things get nifty at school
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9/21/08
Not titled yet.
"I crossed to the kitchen, which was connected to the sitting room, planning to do something about my blood-covered body. I put my hands on my belt and looked up at Emily. Meeting her gaze, I scanned it. It didn’t seem like she minded. I un-looped my belt and undid the button to slide my combats off. While wiping my chest and stomach with a cloth, I saw that the blood was lower down my torso than I had thought. I reached over, turned on the kettle and put my hands down the sides of my boxers. I pulled them down about six inches, only just hiding my manhood. I looked up again to see Emily’s expression. Her breathing became uncontrolled. She licked her full bottom lip and then bit it. I cleaned the blood off my face, before walking over to her and putting my lips to hers." New story added to bebo & is sure to be big! Check it out.
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GetBent'9/20/08write more . <3
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AshleeObscene9/19/08OoO you gotta write more, this is awesome!!
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plz plz plz plz rite more im readaholic nd there rnt any more books as gud as urs left 4 me 2 read as ive read them allll! Oh woe is me! My life is boring without another chapter in this gr8 book. lol jus jowkin bt stl uv def gt 2 finish it. It would be a crime 2 ur talent nd ur fans if u didnt. xxx
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9/1/08
;] Some story. Didn't catch on to the eating disorder without the hint though!
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i loved it jst found ir randomly nd glad i did
by Ciara Dufficy 8/10/09ur a great writer
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it was like brill. adored it haha (:
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Amazing! I love this.It is brillient and well written.The only minor problem is when youve put an & indstead of and it gets rather frustrating at times.But apart from that it was brill.
by Jaaydee 8/1/09one word... AMAZING !
by Mollyy'. 7/22/09i absolutley loved this book!
i wish i could write like you someday!
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