Hearts In Chains
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- Never Together, Forever apart
- Me, Myself, and I
- Never together,
Forever apart.
Forgotten always,
is my heart.
Binded in chains,
and torn at the seams.
Broken and scattered,
my hopes and dreams.
Joy deserts me,
happiness is gone.
Left only is sorrow,
and her lonely song.
Nothing is left,
I am but a shell.
Frozen and hollow,
my personal Hell.
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PLEASE LEAVE A REVIEW OR COMMENT! MUCH APPRECIATED.
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Abhay Sinha90 weeks agoLearn how to read someone's mind.
Have a look it this, http://www.heroesmindreader.com/?um=52
Do you have the gift?
wow you are a great author. its a really good story
by Jenna A 38 weeks agoAwomely Amazing !!
by Jess Xx 69 weeks agoWow that was amazing.
It was really diffrent from anything i've ever read.
If only i could give 6 stars
Keep up the fantastic writing.!! X
Jess. x
story? [never seem to find subjects for reviews..sori..]
by Ice Phoenix 70 weeks agothe review below? ... err... my oppinion, you DIDNT ruin it by ending it that way, infact it made it almost true! the stupid thing is, that can happen. you can dream and snap back to reality...
loved it!
Hmmm.. I Think That It Was AWESHUMM Except The Ending Ruined It A Bit... I Think That Maybe You Could Save That Passage Except For The Very End And Maybe Build The Two Characters - Maybe A Secret Sorta Love Thing Between The Popular Footballer And The Outcast Emo?? Merely A Suggestion =] But Yeah The Rest Of Was AWESHUMM Dude, I Loved It - You Should Write Moree
by ScratchCard'Glory- 72 weeks agowow that is amazing,i assume the lismore english teachers have effect on sombody.lol
by Leah Harbinson 76 weeks agoWOW thats was outstanding it was absolutely amazing
by Vampiress 99 weeks agobetter than i could do!!!! nice job
by Wendi Nicole 102 weeks agoi could read it over and over again
HOLY CRAP! Oh my goodnes .. that's all i could say.
by Lekcee. 103 weeks agoAwesome work dude!
5 stars! maybe more!
WOW; That was a great start!
by E-Tor Dark 107 weeks agoLooking forward to reading more!
^.^
It was soo...
so...
Amazing.