He wasnt who he said he was-Amber's story
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- Am Im not seeing in him what everyone else does?
- Me, Myself, and I
- 10 lockers 10 girls.The Locker Girls follow 10 girls with absoulutely nothing in common.When a teacher becomes fed up with materialist and popularity trends he sees starts the social experiment.These "victims"without knowing have to share the same row of lockers.Some never really meet or not even know each,and the teachers plan begins to go wrong .It tells 10 different stories to show how ppl see other people verses how ppl see themselves,and why they are...themselves.Be amazed as you follow the:Jock,Invisible Girl,Social Climber,Rebel,Ghetto girl,gothic,immigrant,adopted girl,eating disordered girl,and miss popularity.(1Amber,2Casey,3Ka
yla,4Lisha,5Niesha,6Patricia,
7MingLing,8Stacey,9Lisa, 10Ashley)as they find out about themselves and begin seeing things through other peoples eyes.
Note: I will not write a part 2 on this bebo page I guess you will just have to read my book when its published(by january next year) I apoligize in advanced for its climatic ending of part 1. thanx*
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Amber's on what sports team at the beginning
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Please read about my crazy signs in my book and dont take off any stars for it. Im trying to fix most of them. Thanx and if you read this leave a review I really want to know how my book speaks to you so to speak and dont be scared to be brutally honest.thanx*0 781 days
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Read my comment about the weird signs in my book.0 782 days
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Helloooooooo!Book1 and 2
I hope you guys enjoy my book about 10 girls trying to find their place in highschool.I hope that you are able to learn from their mistakes.Im on Book 1 right now but if I have my way Book 2 will be starten within 5 days.If you have read Book1 and haven figured it out Book 2 will feature Kayla Patterson the social climber.0 803 days
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.21 weeks agoDid he fuck the poll after?
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110 weeks ago
Marina Mirage
Heyy! it was good!!!
plz visit my book i only just started and im new at this!
http://www.bebo.com/richgirlw
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Melonie T111 weeks agoI just found out that I cant help the punctuation problem because I dont know why but its not me. When I save what I write sometimes the computer puts weird signs like &/^ instead of a word. I type this on microsoft word processor with auto grammar and spelling mistakes but Im sorry about that I have tried to fix them but I dont have time to fix all of them so we're just going to have to deal.
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Melonie T114 weeks ago
Dont copy my book anywhere or I will sue!!!For like alot of money you dont have!!!!
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Melonie T114 weeks ago
What makes Fiction and Real Life different is that fiction has to make sense.
A review i rele enjoyed this story
by ThatGirl 38 weeks agoplease write more
would be 5 stars then (:
hehe just to give you insentive
read mine? www.bebo.com/ella-rae i need help on it
YAYYYY I only read the frist paragraph b/c my pc is really crap and keeps freezing i am suprised i an even get this comment on but it sounds realllllllyyy coooool i am gona try read the rest 2m
looking 4wrd 2 it 
by Kiss-Kiss-Bang-Bang 55 weeks agotell me wat u think please!
http://www.bebo.com/SixWeekNightmare
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by Insane In The Membrane 83 weeks agoits a pretty soft starting though could have bin better but its pretty good otherwise when i have the time to read all of it i will ok
take a look at my page
http://www.bebo.com/blankpaigezzzoasis
Fabulous... ...but please watch your punctuation. Too many people of the English-speaking world have been lost to "txt tlk" and other forms of illiteracy, we don't want to lose you too!
by Ms L Symon 111 weeks agoits iyt. not to gr8, because i cant understand half of it, work on yur puncuation, but otha den dat, its alryt.
by Catherine Irene 112 weeks agodude i read that whole thing pretty rad.
by Chelsea McKayx 113 weeks agoi can't relate so maybe you live somewhere else on this planet.