As someone who was on the recieving end of bullying I found this really interesting. All through school I was bullied mainly as I am over weight but also because I wear glasses and I had a stutter!! I was a bullys dream!! lol,
My mates didn't stand up for me either as they were too scared of being a victim of the bullies.
I think you did a great job with telling this story and I have no real critism of it apart from the fact it was hard to follow at times coz you've obviously written it as it came into your head!! Not a bad thing but I just find it a little irratic (sp?) and hard to follow.