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A Collection Of Short Stories
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- A Pessimist's EMOtional Short Stories
- Me, Myself, and I
- This is a short collection of stories that I have written and will update with new ones as soon as I write them....Note, none of the stories have anything to do with eachother. The story focus heavily on the feelings and emotions of the characters. Also there is next to no character development in them as I wanted the emotions in themselves to be the main characters. You will understand when you read, if you read.....
Please dont use my stories or any part of them for anything, and do not try to pass them off as your own.....
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The Heavenly Curse
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Realisation
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Devastation
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A Tearful Goodbye
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The Others
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Alone
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Liberation
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Torn Apart
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Redemption
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The Park
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Taken
12
The Forsaken
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Mrs Leylah Burnett9/26/08
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Bradley12/26/07dude that stuff is amazing truly explains stuf and puts it in perspective great work dude rock on
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10/28/07
Lies and Deceit Wow. I find your use of visceral imagery fantastic. The way you describe the girl, helps me sympathise with your unnamed main character. The repetition makes your work so much more poignant. I'm giving this four stars mainly because i think there is a lot of untapped talent that lies in you. However, this poem is rather lacking in quality compared to your other work. Bring back more of the extended metaphors, (veil) and try to make it longer. Also make your rhyming more consistent.
by Fiona Higgins 11/22/08I see that youre currently situated in Cyprus but i found your bebo and this through some random friends from Edinburgh. Id like to chat some more and discuss your other works. This also seems a bit dated, have you not uploaded anything recently? Hope you dont mind me adding you aswell. Hope you accept
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over writing your over writing, you dont need to reinstate that a pizza has "gone bad", if you have already written "week old pizza," as well as having described how rank it smelled...trust your reader more.
by Georgia 3/22/08There are examples of this all throughout your writing...Even writing the words "over and over", is over stating and wasted words. You would sound fresher if you just wrote "being hit with an iron bat repeatably." Or something like that, this is the most important thing I learnt on the one year Diploma in Creative Writing I did.
wow. very interesting....enchantingly worded as well...u have a VERY HUGE vocabulary
by Kay Ann Insanity 10/27/07suits you well, i could picture everything
awesome job!
I Like I Like These Are Amazzing
by Mell 10/6/07Yoo definetly Should Post Me Them To Put In My Artistic Band Thingy
Emence
Go Yoo!!!!