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beyond Real
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- Profile views: 47
- Profile created: August 2007
- www.bebo.com/beyondReal
- Category:
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- fairy tale creatures should stay in story books
- Me, Myself, and I
- I started writing this when I was eleven.Then it was a short story. Then it got lost among the many files and folders in my desk.
Then a few weeks ago,It reappeared. I began to read it,and felt there was more to it then I had writtin. So, I started writing again.
This is my second book,I hope its ok.
This is the story of a woman,haunted by a memory. A memory that has left her broken and afraid.
Now,three years later,returning to the town of her birth,the memory turns to Present. And the skeletons hid in her closet are coming out to play.Will she survive this time? Or will she join the fate of countless others?
:) This is a really good peice of writing, but it's more like and intro rather than a story in itself. use this to devolp it and write more, make a story.
by FutureHerpetologist 2/1/09What are these creatures?Why did it take you father?
What happened next?
What happened before this?
What about your mother, your sister?
Develop it and this could be a great short story or even book.
Godd luck and keep at it.
It's a fantastic intro though, I thought there was another page
tht was AWSUM!! OMg i have never read something like this tht was amazing!!!!!
by XxDemonic Pixiexx 11/2/07Wow I really like your style, its really intriguing.
by Thurysa 8/9/07Now be nice and go read and review mine =]]
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