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Children Of Destiny Part 1
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- ...Doomed to fade back into the darkness...
- Me, Myself, and I
- Twelve totally different kids. One intertwined destiny.
When the twelve kids - Gareth, Onyx, Serenity, Dia, Beryl, Alex, Ruby, Leon, Sapphire, Verdelite, Topaz and Turk - are seperated from their homes and are pushed into a live-threatening quest in a totally different world, they see they need each other to survive.
Sometime along that quest, they realise that it's not only each other they need, but something else as well...
Part One - Beryl and Verdelite
Beryl thought that her and her sister - Verdelite - would be together forever. But apparently someone had other plans.
After Beryl's initiation test, Verdelite is kidnapped, leaving Beryl more alone and confused than she was before. Shocked and ashamed, she turns to her only friend, Ruby the fairy. Together, they set out in search of Beryl's sister, the only one who really understood her.
Little did she know, Verdelite's captors had been setting her up for something much bigger than she dared believe...
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Xxheatherxx3/14/09here check out mi real link dat was a stupid accident!!!
oops!!! but seriously here's the reall one: http://www.bebo.com/innerworldxx
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Xxheatherxx3/14/09
Hey if u wanna check out mi book here's d link: http://www.bebo.com/authors101
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8/13/08
Xxheatherxx
hey in d chapter beryl u say Verdelite's hair is brown but in chapter Verdelite you say its red! Which is it?? here take sum luv nd tell me pwitty pwease!
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Angel Of Chaos12/15/07
Just one question, why are the names of most of the people a stone of some sort, or something in spanish, the majority of them are, except for Serenity, Alex, Gareth and Turk......
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Gelmason Li8/20/07Intresting book. (one thing common wiht all the fans: all like anime) lol
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Matty Hyuuga8/12/07this looks cool cam I join
OMG!!! Keep writin ya shud get it published. Dats a best seeler!!! Ya ave da best creative mind on dis fing!!!
by Ciarán Murphy 8/11/08good good! Hey great book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by Xxheatherxx 7/1/08!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its deadly!!!!!!! if ya wanna check out mi book dat wud be awesome!!!!!
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Heya! Nice! I Really Liked It! You Have A Future In Writing <name-who-i-know-but-shall-not-reveal> Lol
by - - Germany 1/31/08Well... Nice!!
by Pikachu 1/1/08You should write more!!
:) Fantastic bring on more
by Woowoo Binzy 9/19/07AWSOME! I've read all of your story so far and i have to add (i liked how you added the japanese) but is she actually from japan, and was her sister the girl in the first chapter after the prologe (excuse my spelling)? And i thought she was the child of rebirth, no offence or is that just the people from the lab making a mistake???? LOL, apart from that i thought the story was awsome!
by Dana Sama 8/12/07Please update me when you've written more!
really good its really good it made me think of my life and how much its just like what happens in this story. i think this is going to be a great book and i also think that when its finnished you need to get it published!!! great work keep it up
by Authors Only 7/13/07