Sad Faces
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- Profile created: July 2007
- www.bebo.com/spookyfictions
- Category:
- Horror
- Publisher:
- Rebecca
- Me, Myself, and I
- A spooky story that i have been making since i was 11 but i finally think its ready.
its about 3 children who go into an abandoned house and get seperated into 3 destinations with no idea of how to get back or if they ever will see eachother agaI have never watched the grudge and therefore i havent copied it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Characters in Sad Faces
Annie - 13 years old. black hair and green eyes. not as brave
as paul. She is best friends with Kayleigh more than
Paul.
Kayleigh - 12 years old. Youngest. Blond hair and blue eyes.
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Moala Fa'Aui124 weeks agoumm..i jus like that pic you got for the profile foto..LoL
is this abowt the grudge??i love dat movie!!like hellah!!
Good Wow scary man lol loved ur style of writing!
by -MeL- 81 weeks agoy not check out my story
www.bebo.com/queenthistle
:P Well it scared me! But Could've had a better ending,, WRITE MORE PLEASE!! need to know what happens! Well Done x
by Desolation.Row. 85 weeks agook its ok just write more
by Jesus Ur Nose Is Big 104 weeks agoDis Is awsum i luved it I absolutley loved this please write more lol.
by Brenda McCormack.X 114 weeks agoThe Grudge It was an ok book but i think you just copied the grudge. It all got very the same therefor boring.
by -Mark Scott' 119 weeks agoWhat happend to the two girls?
Also when paul was fell in the hole and he had landed you kept going
Paul went over to it
Paul opened it
Paul thought,,
Your could have used he insted of paul all the time.
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by Piggy. 121 weeks ago.,¡i|¹i¡¡i¹|i¡,.
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Thats was great =] keep it up and read myne!
Just spend a Ickle bit more time on it
but good all the same
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Amii
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