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Lost In Love
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- Me, Myself, and I
- What Is This??
Why do I feel this way?
Why is it that no matter what I do
You are always in my head?
Day after day, I can’t seem to get you out.
It doesn’t matter if I am with my friends
Or during an exam
I think of you day and night
No matter what
What am I supposed to do?
I have tried to forget you, but that hasn’t worked
I have tried to tell myself that you are no good for me
That only made you run through my mind more
I wish I didn’t feel like this
But I do
And I don’t know what it is I am feeling
It is strange to me
Is it love, what I am feeling?
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My Poems
Hey people
can you please write a review on my poems or even one, Maybe even write me a comment to let me know if they are crap.
Thanks
Kalee0 Comments 307 weeks
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What Is This??
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I Love You
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Afraid of Love
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How I Feel
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I Wish
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Love, Love, Love
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My Heart
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Why Don't You Like Me?
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He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not
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These Hazel Eyes
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How Much I Like You
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Those Three Words
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Meagan B12/14/07
WoW!!! I just read these poems!! Thay r awesum!!!!!! I luv 2 rite poetry also. WOW!!
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Racquel Jones7/14/07come on and check out mine!
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..........7/1/07Awh so nice! well done,Check mine! http://www.bebo.com/Profile.jsp?Memb...
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g h6/16/07
imlost
I thought they were ok I liked a few of your poems. They seemed quite repetitive though, that kinda bugged me a bit, but not too much. I liked the display of feeling, you did seem to get your overall feeling across fairly well. I don't want to be condescending or anything, but your poems seemed a bit more like puppy love that many people experience at a young age... not quite true love. I know what it's like to feel so much for someone and just want to be with them all the time, but later I found that my feelings were more that of infatuation than love. True love between a couple is something not many people are able to find. I hope you're able to move on from your love troubles, I'm sure you will... infatuated states are usually shortlived. If you have any desire to read anyone elses poetry, I have a page here on bebo. Here is the link: http://www.bebo.com/turtlepoetics
by Loga Fixico 5/11/08I'd appreciate any reviews or comments you could offer. Keep writing, you seem to have a good feel for it.
Peace,
Turtle
AWESUM!!! Your poetry is completely awesum!!
by Meagan B 12/14/07I LUVE YEW! NONE
by Ii Luf Mii Babii 11/9/07Gud as Hey thus poems are really gud
by AJ 9/13/07oh my gosh i loved alot of your poems they were fantastic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by Alexas Harley 9/2/07hello.. i'm extremly bored and lukin fer inspiration fer my poems, i like that how i feel one, its lovely, keep up the writin dude!! XxX
by Blah 7/3/07your poem hey these poems are great. I can finally comment on them.
by Christie P 6/12/07Kirby