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story of a heart brake
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- Heartbrake</3
- Me, Myself, and I
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My name is Hilary Brennock
My poems are based on love death and anything emotional because thats when i write i write to let off steam.
I would love to get published untill then its a hobbie.
Im 14 years old i havnt been alive long but i've some good.bad and down right horrible experiences usually with boys (no offence)
Please please please
Leave a comment and please join i would really appriciate it
Well thats it from me ill let my poems speak for themselves x
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© Copy right 2008 all rights reserved Hilary Brennock
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waste
You tell me im a waste
Tell me you need space
I never got this out
This need for you
This wanting but not suceeding to hate you
To loathe you
I should have done it there and then
It doesnt matter where and when
But now its out
Now its out
No more need to scream
No more need to hurt
Just hopelessly wanting
And stupidly needing
But im better of now
One day you'll know how
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I was hoping you'd be here
I was hoping you were near
I wanted to say sorry
I couldnt wait to get it out
I wanted to scream
I want to shout
Everything i wanted lost by a few angry words
I never meant to come out
Im sorry
i didnt mean it0 Comments 241 weeks
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out
I'm in the middle and i want out
You cant just use me
Can't you see?
This is killing me
This time im not taking it
This time i wont fake it
This time there wont be a next time
Cut out the middle man
Maybe then you'll understand
yeah i want her to be happy
But i have to think of me
When i said i keep my jelousy close
I lied.
© Copy right 2008 all rights reserved Hilary Brennock0 Comments 241 weeks
Haha, Didnt No What I Was On Then Lol
Very Nice Poems 
ILoveYou x x x x x x x x x x x
Well Hilary Hilary Hilary
Tbh, I Love Your Poems 
One Of Mine Got Published In A Book In Year 5 
Was Well Impressed 
But Yours Is Definatly better 
Just Yoking 
Yeah Their Good 
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here hilary hav sum luv
i like your poems alot,they have alot of feeling+there short and sweet you deserve love for them ++keep writing!
good poems must admit lyk
I Heart Hilarys Poems! Their Ace
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bit harsh bell criticism isnt meant to be so tough... although you make some good points. well in all these poems are quite good might want to plan out longer next tme try nd stick to a sertain structure nd I think we can expect great things =] now thats a review
haha, u died a gun-related emo death. Which probably explains the lack of spelling accuracy and punctuation, and the blatant absence of rhythm in your work. Sorry, but you just have to be critical sometimes.
my books:- - Livealie http://--LIVEALIE--.bebo.com - Live Today Die Tomorrow http://LiveTodayDieTomorrow.bebo.com - Equinox http://-EQUINOX-.bebo.com
those poems are great!! if you had the right music you can easyly make them into songs. I have this website where I put all my reviews on and I would l;ike to put a review of some of your peoms on it if you wouldn't mind?
hey thanks for the small review
become a fan of mine if u wana and check out my other books and ill keep my comments on urs frequent 
- Livealie http://-LIVEALIE-.bebo.com/ - Live Today Die Tomorrow, http://LiveTodayDieTomorrow.bebo.com - Equinox http://-EQUINOX-.bebo.com kirk