My Last Supper and Other Stories
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- Profile created: June 2007
- www.bebo.com/Ghaidoo
- Category:
- Horror
- Publisher:
- Senussi
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What do you think of my short story so far?
- Its Brilliant!! when are you going to write the rest?
- I'm quite partial to the protagonist
- undecided, it sounds promising
- not my cup of tea...a bit amateur
- terrible writing and lame story line so far..spare me the ending
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Your Thoughts
Hey guys,
i'd be happy to hear your thoughts on my first chapter of 'My last supper'.
thanks!
Mari
xxx0 Comments 915 days
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Just A Few Short Stories85 weeks agoHey good story I really liked the way it was written.
I read squalor aswell, when are you planning to add more to that? It sounds good for the beginning. -
Michelle129 weeks agoTO*
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Beki Aahh130 weeks agoa very good opening just wish there woz more vivid descibtion but so far so good n i cant wait 2 read the rest
ooommmmmmg the begining was so good the end ended to soon wat the fuck? o ok it gets better wow killer
by Jessyka Stahl 121 weeks agothe ending so unexpected neva saw it comin so exicitin
by Beki Aahh 130 weeks ago