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Is it Love?
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- Me, Myself, and I
- This book is about a 6th grade girl who thinks she is in love. She finally thinks she has found a guy that loves her as much as she loves him. She thinks he is absolutley perfect!
It starts out slow but it gets better. This is my first time writing so leave comments and tell me what you think. If you see spelling errors, please let me know. :-) Thanks
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This is the first time that i have ever really written for other people to see. I have done assignments for school but only my friends and teachers read them. By The Way... All the characters are an actually person to me but with a different name. The first 4 chapters are somewhat real. Everything else is partly true but isn't really based off of anything. My name isn't really even Madison. I didn't want my friends to read this yet. I'm not ashamed of it or anything but I don't think they ever really knew how I felt when they were "yelling" at me. and i am the Erin in this book... but thats not my real name either...lol0 Comments 309 weeks
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October 3rd Erin's house
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October 3rd Erin's house
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October 13th the football game
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October 22nd Erin's house
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October 22nd The Hospital
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October 23rd The Hospital
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AislinnMurray8/15/07
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Samantha.7/7/07
when r u going to write more?!
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Hyperity5/28/07Oooh first fan WHOOT! Well i think everyone has talent to become an author and all you need is encouragment
ok i suppose As it's your first time writing I am not going to be as harsh as I wanted to, the story is not very good but it is ok. When reading the story I think I got to chapter four and decided that it wasn't worth reading to be honest but I gave it the benefit of the doubt and carried on reading. I think for you to keep the reader engaged you need to add more description of how they felt and what that first kiss felt like as a first kiss is always magical. The Kiss needs to be more than a peck on the cheek as when you imagine a first you imagine more than just a peck. you have a few spelling mistakes and error that should be correct when you read this review. my advice to you would be to look at your story and see if you can re-write your story still keep the same idea. you need to look at your bad reviews and follow the advice of the people.
by Babs 7/27/08:S Childish and rushed
by Brandy 3/27/08sorry
work on stretching things out and adding detail
OMG that was amazing.. you should publish that and i want a free copy when itz published lol
by Vampiress 2/3/08p.s. there wasa bit of gramar and punctuation mistakes but it was absolutely FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!
Really good! I love it!
by Katie 12/1/07Haha people that talk like Jess really piss me off!
Same about people TH4T T41K 1YK TH!$!
Anyway, I love the way you set out the story, good suspense too!
Great job!
P.S: Just to be fair, since I've done a review for yurs, could yu do a review for mine please?
www.bebo.com/love-me-forever
It's is ALSO a romance
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story not bad would have givin 5 but seemed a bit childish sorry was good doh
by Kelly Keane 10/8/07UGH! that was retarded sorry but it was good at the very beginning...but it was very childish and stupid i didn't like it at all sorry!
by Katrina Brocco 9/1/07no offence but i think the ending was a bit rushed compared 2 the rest of the story but still 4 stars
by Alan Nicks 8/10/07ah pretty good
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