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Can't Stop Falling

Hello? I had like 93 fans and now I only have 16. hmm. no fair ;-(

11/28/07 | me too! | Reply

Can't Stop Falling
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About Me

Me, Myself, and I
Carl likes Melanie, Melanie likes Jack, Jack likes Jade and Jade likes anybody and everybody!

Problem 1:
Mel practically NEEDS Jack, she thinks he is her soulmate. But he likes the biggest slut in school Jade. Jade always parrades her relationship with anyone under Melanies' nose and Mel couldn't handle it if Jade and Jack started dating because she knew she'd have to watch.

Problem 2:
Melanie already has a boyfriend, Carl, who loves Mel with every fibre of his being. Can she pluck up the courage to break up with the boy that stands in the way of her happiness even if it means breaking Carls' heart?

This is in fact my own crazy love story only re-vamped to be more fast paced. You can't make fun of my writing skills as I have none, but I've always thought this a tremendous thing to go through.
I hope you like it and do my polls and stuff!

~*~Miffy~*~
xxXxxXxxXxx
P.s. check out the second part here:
http://CanYouForgiveMe.bebo.com

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  • Re-writing!!!

    Hiya fans!

    A piece of info in case you haven't already found out.

    I am re-writing this story and making it better. You all loved it last time so I hope you'll like it better this time round.

    There is a poll so you can tell me whether you think it's better this time round or last draft.

    Thankies for your time

    -Hayley-

    0 Comments 286 weeks

  • The End Is Nigh

    I'm sorry guys, that is the end of this story, however, I am in the process of writing a sequel which will be out soon, I only have two chapters at the moment and I'm going to write at least four before publishing it. I will put the URL on the main bit when I think it's ready to be seen.
    Thanks for your support
    ~*~Hayley~*~

    0 Comments 308 weeks

  • Any ideas?

    Hi everyone!!
    I'd just like it if incase you think of any improvements while reading the story, you can just put them here, saves comment space!!
    My main thought with this story thing is that I HAVE FANS!!! I'm amazed you actually like what I've written!! lol well any thoughts write them below!
    Love you loads
    Hayley/Mel
    oxXXoxOOxo

    2 Comments 311 weeks

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1 The Bus Journey 2 Arrivals 3 The first night 4 The Next Day 5 That Night 6 Painful decisions 7 Night-time events 8 A different kind of love 9 Lovers Blues 10 The Last Night 11 A happy Beginning 12 Epilogue

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