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Voices
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- Me, Myself, and I
- Voices is about a man and women who are in love and their relationship up to the holocaust.... when there torn apart because she is a jew and he is a nazi. this story is a tearjerker and was originally written for my english coursework which got an A. well i hope you enjoy it love cat xx
rabbits is about a litlle girl georgie and her mums journey as georgies step dad is a alcoholic love laura x
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to begin with i wrote this book for my english coursework, getting a B because of punctuation, i had one of my best buddies laura become my editor and sort my punctuation out because im bad at them kinda things!lol i love to make up stories and this ones story line i worked on for a couple of weeks... about love and tragedy.
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im 15 and live in brampton in huntingdon i go to hinchingbrooke school and have fantastic mate at home and at school. my friends are always there for me, and im v. grateful as ive got into alot of mess b4 lol
i go to air cadets with one of my best buddies naomi and weve been in rain n cold and hot n sunny together! (literally!)
if you wanna know anything else dont be afraid to ask me love cat xxx0 Comments 312 weeks
thankyou for that constructive criticism however may i remind you that this page is a fiction page, that means it is not true as is lord of the rings i dont know many gollums. love cat xx
As a love story, its not too bad. However, historically, a Jew and a Nazi officer would not fall in love in 1936. Even though it was before WW2, Hitler was openly persecuting the Jews. A loyal Nazi officer wouldn't jeopardise himself by doing that. What's more, a law passed in 1935 banned all sexual relationships between Aryans and Jews. But I did enjoy the story! Unfortunately, a year of studying all the things Hitler did in AS history makes you nit-picky about that kinda thing! lol x-Rocket-Rabbit-x
wow this is ur school fing its really good
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hah! stole ur comment virginity! and... i did loadsa grammar on that story! i think i should be mentioned
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