If you are using Internet Explorer 6, you may not have the best Bebo experience. Please consider upgrading.
Poetry.
4 
- Profile views: 847
- Profile created: March 2007
- www.bebo.com/tessaspoetry
- Category:
- Poetry
- Publisher:
- Tessa castle
- Me, Myself, and I
- its just something i wrote.
dont be afraid to be harsh in the reviews.
but im only 16 after all.
my poems are mostly about life, some of the things in them i havent actually experienced but i got inspiration from peoples stories.
(e.g. suicide and rape)
the funny thing is im actually quite a positive girl.
please comment and review my poems.
thanks.
x
p.s.- i've had one of my poems published, in a book called forever spoken, compiled by the international library of poetry. the poem that was published was titled "the real meaning of love". I was pretty proud, and it was on the first page in the book
(7-12-07)
close Blog
close Read It
close Reviews
close Comments
-
X Jessica X6/29/08Hey, im gonna comment, not rate, cuz i don't like ratings. Doesn't look like anyone's been on here for a while, but i just wanted to say i really liked a lot of your poems, like he lied, watching my funeral, pop, and this one boy. You have talent, i can see why you were published.
-
Smoke and Knives3/16/08Meditate. Count to ten before losing your temper or getting aggravated
-
Austin Edwards1/2/08Thanks for supporting my poetry this long...be sure to become a fan and also I have written about 5 or 6 new ones since body of water. If you should want to check them out. Hope you had a good new years and thanks again and keep up the writing its making good reading
-
12/27/07
If at 1st u dont suceed cry cry again
hey u have some good poems your stuff has a similar darkness to mine be great if you could read them sometime i have a guest writers blog if you fancy putting one up on the page let me know spaceforheads
-
5/9/07
Nicolee
Haee Darl x Thanx for commenting my poems ii Lovee yoors =] Their real sophisticated.. keep writing Ill Checkk Bacck =] Fannx Darl x Love Nikki
-
Dark For Stars5/2/07yo, gr8 poems, loved em, keep up the gd work Master Dog XxX
-
Cian Morris A.K.ABubbashakespeare4/27/07iv only had a glance coz i gotta run thats good stuff tho
-
Eoghan Ó Braonáin4/27/07
Check out some of my work @ http://scealta.bebo.com http://obraonainpoems.bebo.com
-
Angus MacHaggis4/26/07Yas!!! 't is guid tae write write write!!! Therapy for the psyche, aye!!!
-
Tessa4/24/07its all good. what the hell is a jazz club though.. anyways. your entitled to your opinion. i know im not an expert; im only 13.
-
4/22/07
him i really liked that poem
by Hello Facination 5/2/08it all tied together nicely
heres my page if ya wanna take a peak lol
http://www.bebo.com/blankpaigezzzoasis
good luck to your writing
i read alot of them i my self am i story an poem writer i started at very young age an hav had one poem n a story published in yr 6 .....
by Sarah 1/20/08i may b only 15 turning 16 this yr but i have read these an inspired me too write a book about some of the things u wrote about if i complete it would u like to c some of it ?
good work keep it up
Nobody knows they are all very good, but this was this one i could relate to most, so much so in fact i could have wrote it myself at one time or another it seems like you use your poetry as a release for your hurt, pain etc, which can only be a good thing, your writing will improve and mature as you get older too so as long as you keep at it, which you really should, you've got it girl don't let it go. kaz x
by Kaz 12/27/07my page >>>> http://www.bebo.com/spaceforheads
goods it was good sad as she thought she wanted to live after all but fate had it out for her anyways i liked it keep up the good work
by Brad 12/18/07abused I enjoyed the darkness of this poem, it changes to a direction mid way which shows a terrible situation.
by Andrew Ferguson 11/11/07Thanks for the review of mine, my stuff was lyrics I wrote for when I was in a band.
Very Good Keep up the good work!
by Eugene Fagan 9/20/07You can find some of my work here if you have time!
http://www.bebo.com/Just-Tha-G and on
http://www.bebo.com/Just-Tha-G2
hey i liked your poems, they're very good, i'm going to become a fan and i hope you'll check mine out too
by Only Unwin. 9/17/07http://doesit4me.bebo.com
Very impressive Very good job writting, I liked "The Real Meaning of Love" the best out of all the poems. You've got talent there, the emotion and tone in your poems are really good, if not spot on in some cases. And you're written about some pretty tough issues as well, good job.
by Herr Aaron Augustus Vitus A 8/11/07Keep up the good work!
Aaron A.
poem fair play your poem is really good keep up the good work
by Dawn Brady 8/3/07