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love is blinding
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- Profile created: March 2007
- www.bebo.com/love-is-blinding
- Category:
- Romance
- Publisher:
- saffi
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its not true
if you are wonderin you should no its not true its made up pritty good for my first book dont you think1 Comment 327 weeks
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love
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the forest
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what do i do?
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me and jamie
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telling jamie
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the preposal
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alfie
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my worst nightmare
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bangbang
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XxfreakannexX9/3/07hey girl you can add me if you want
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Defender6/6/07tone down the green backround its to over wellming. try blue or black then you have something.
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Astrea.5/6/07Luv iit ___________go on mynn iif yaa wna ?>..http://Thiis-Gurl-2k7.bebo.com Nuff Lve
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Randomistic Mel.4/28/07good work
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M!Ss B!TccH Chll03 ♥ --xXx4/27/07Gud C h l o e . . x
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Nathalie Mc Cann.4/18/07was dat a true story mand did the baby ellemay die
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Kalisha.3/26/07Wow! That story is great! Keep writing!! I am a Fan now! I would rate you 5/5 but my computer won't let me!! Sorry! But it's Cool! I don't care if it's fake or real, all of the stories are cool! Thanks for the read!
death Theres too much death involved, its almost like you can tell that someone/thing is going to die, or that shes going to get beaten up again. you should really spell check your work before as well it would improve it so much. sorry if iam being harsh. You have a good plotline though, it just needs more work. x
by Leanora 7/31/09Needs ...more it had a very goos strory line but the events were way to rushed and it lacked detail and epth and the ending was to sad and sudden one sentence dosn't do that sort of a ending justice
by Miss Alice 5/24/08sorry but the idea was terrific
Emma
=/ Well...It's a good book...the plot and all.
by Lauren 2/24/08But the problem is that it needs more depth, more detail because most of the events happen really quickly.
Also a bit of spelling errors.
But overall quite good
. woah dats rly gr8
by Cat Ere 10/19/07v sad bt brill!
wow a lot of pain, wasnt expecting any of that.
by Dyer 9/21/07good story could do with tweaking in places but it was good.
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so cool this story is os sad if this are life u or a firend r living u should tell someone
by Tarlishia Mallen 8/9/07ILOVEIT. Saffii,
by Salty Sailor Suzy. 7/10/07you're just cool.
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wow this is amazing i loved it i want 2 read it again which i will, wow i loved it so much i was so gripping well done.
by Vikki 6/14/07i know u don't know me and i don't know u but i still read it and i thought i was like so cool and amazing!!!!
i will read it again soon
i truly did love it!!!
i highly recomend it!!!