Hellspawn
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- www.bebo.com/fred-hellspawn
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- Horror
- Me, Myself, and I
- He pushed shut his eyes, trying to shut out the pain swallowing him. He blinked. He saw a shadow flicker past. He froze. Nothing, he thought. He suspected he was in the hospital for the night, after the accident. Straining his muscles, he pulled himself up. It was pitch black, but he could just make out cracks of light leaking from a double doorway. Tom pushed off the thin sheet covering him and stumbled to the doorway.he reached out, his eyes desperately trying to piece together his environment., when he felt the door infront of him through the thin lins of light he saw a sign stuck to the doors. There, in bold, black writing were the words: morgue. A cry of terror pierced the darkness.
the story is about a boy found unconcious, he is thought dead and is trapped in a morgue, but is haunted by a ghostly shadow. imaginary? or insane?
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MaTty Th Lawd140 weeks agohey every one go on
http://willameteincident.bebo.com if your in for a scare it not finished im on chapter 4 -
Emma141 weeks agoyour really good!
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Alss146 weeks agoWow Fred!!
Scarrryy dude!!!
Can you write a nice, girly book for me?
Love ali x x
Damn!!! Fantastic Story. I'm told that my stories r twisted but ur story surprised me. I loved the vocabulary u used 2 convey ur thoughts in this story, they're not too complicated nor simple, just right. I would love to see this story continue but based on the ending it'll be a challenge. I look forward to more stories from u and thanks for the wonderful read.
by JP 69 weeks ago-JP aka Joe
good job i like the story
by Trina 74 weeks agoi hope it is not total finished lol
2/5 its god i guess but s little bit short and hard to work out, but its got the makings of a good story
by Tomm H 120 weeks agoawesome hey that was incredible it was evil,twisted and horrific from one fucked up mind to another great storys or poems or whatever they are....
by Red Drunk Cokonuttys 121 weeks agonot bad it was ok still don't get it really was tom the kiler all along or was it a demon getting in2 him. Wasn't the best i read but good attempt. Good luck in yr other stories or follow up.
by Victoria Mc Kenna 134 weeks agowow fred thats so cool sent a shiver down me spine!!!
by Daisy 141 weeks ago