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Murder
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- Profile created: February 2007
- www.bebo.com/TheMurderChronicles
- Category:
- Horror
- Publisher:
- David Corr
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- Me, Myself, and I
- The peaceful town of RiverSide Falls is home to a new evil lurking in the streets, its dark alleyways, waiting for new victims. RiverSide Falls will never be safe again.
coming soon : Murder 2
John is back and he is covering his tracks as the police piece together the clues after Seamus disappearance. The kills are closer to home as the Murder Chronicles continues
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Mary V7/25/07nice pic
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6/18/07
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Amee Sian6/12/07havnt read the book but ur fit
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Chip5/22/07hey your story great w/b please
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Greg B5/16/07
Cracka u got issues
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Asi5/11/07Nice come check out my story at http://theabandonedmansion.bebo.com thanks
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David Corr4/4/07more on the way big time
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Kenny Mogensen4/3/07it is to be continued i hope...otherwise there it a terrible endin lol.. keep it up tho kenny XxxxxX
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4/2/07
LaylaF
Ah David my wee author friend, very good, very good, when are you going to write more! Don't leave me in suspense!!!
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Judge Fudge3/10/07that stry sounds good m8 keep it up.
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Darragh Kelly3/8/07whats wit the wink weird kid boy!??! ya faggit!! and sorry i didnt read story but im sure it good
story loved but then im a sucker for murder stories keep up the good work mate and i hope to hear more i mean read more
by FInding-'Emo 11/13/07Cool Good Story!!!
by Jeffrey Devers 9/19/07=) Hey,
by Brittany 8/13/07I reli like this story. Ur an awesome writer!
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Thanx heaps and keep writing!
more more more wers the sequel that was cool
by Mister Incredible 8/3/07Pretty Good It was pretty good! except for the part that it doesn't have an ending that makes sense. You left me wondering, "what did the two girls say", and "who was convicted". Overall, i think it was ok.
by Brad S. 7/10/07Need a little work but good. hey nice idea but u need to develop it more. creat a little suspence lenthen it out. nice discriptions but you've got to lengthen out the chapters. but you've got a good idea going there relax and take it slower see what interests you in other books and take note. i tried it and it really helps. well goodluck in the future. oh and can you check out my book please. its called shadow demon. http://shadowdemon2.bebo.com
by Laoise 6/27/07brill hey cousin i thought it was brill when did u put this up
by Lee 6/18/07Magnificent! Very,
by Chip 5/22/07Inspiring story great use of paragraphs and links as a lvl 7 its quite great
punctuatin...ehhh it was good but the links were great and the feeling you give readers was great too fascinating story this would take you a long way mate.
Therefore the story is for all aes so the story is for everyone to read.
Hawk.
P.S Write back please
I'm a level 7 speller so i think your story was great!
Well it could of been better. I enjoyed some parts but most of it was i could say a bit boring i like the first chapter because there was good description but it got in far into the book i lost the plot.
by Megs 'Ox 5/18/07GREAT damn that was great i really loved it
i hope i can read the next chapter soon 
by Nick S. 5/16/07