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Through the Portal
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- Me, Myself, and I
- Sometimes being different is something to treasure and respect.
Dyra, misunderstood, a loner by most peoples opinion, but what is it about her that atrracts George to her?
''As he treaded quitely after her up the overgrown path, the branches and briars scraping at his face and arms like the hands of all those who supposedly died here when the great people of the Regulae made their last stand before they were driven to extinction by the savage beast knownn as man.Some say those left, fled to a wasteland in a different dimension through a portal in the ancient stone circle.
The story of Regulae is wrote just to freak out little kids told by their older brothers, sisters or cousins when they annoy them, but all stories have to begin with some truth......
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My account was deletd by someone in a internet cafe and I just got it reactivated so more on the way.0 Comments 320 weeks
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I hope people enjoy this short story of mine, please don't be too critical as its my first attempt at writing like this.0 Comments 325 weeks
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Amaya Tsukino -Chels-4/29/07Hey, Check out my story! http://FrieghtfilledNight.bebo.com
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Jamie Kim4/1/07hey i was just passing by and read ur story/book it is sooo awesome ur good with words i would say plzzzz write some more quick i just can't wait!! thanxx
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Lil Miss Randomer3/6/07just thought i should write something good page by the way xxx



Brilliant! nice book really enjoyable
by Larry K 4/14/07Yay! Excellent voice.
by Michelle Lokket 4/9/07Wonderful imagery.
Original story line.
I'm loving it!
There are a few grammar problems here and there, mostly dealing with the dialogue, but I like it. Update soon!!
Please?!