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The Ice And Weeds That Grow About Me
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- Profile created: February 2007
- www.bebo.com/TheIceAndWeeds
- Category:
- Poetry
- Me, Myself, and I
- This is just a collection of poems by me, they are written on the spot, so forgive the lack of structure and rhythm but they are ment to be like that.
I also ask that you forgive me for spelling errors that I make, my spelling terrible but not perfect.
Thank you for any critisim and complements that you make towards my work both are welcome.
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New Poems added but to see them you have to go to view all I suggest No.15 it my best.
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Which one do you like best ? 2
- Without you dedicated to Laura
- Tears won't flow and the memorys won't fade
- No regrets, I wish...
- The Darkness
- Dressings
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- The Lady of Ice
- Heart once broken can never truly be fixed
- The disapointment that angels bring
- The Longing
- The Chain About My Waist.
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"The Chain About My Waist". what do you think?
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My best poem ever!!!!!!
I finaly found the orgnal copy of my poem that I wrote for Drama. So every opion that you can give me about it imortant!!!!!! The Devil's Speeach is the one you want.0 Comments 317 weeks
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Entry 1 I guess
Had a read through of http://KwittyKwatPoems.bebo.com
Fab completly ab fab. I recomend that you read them.
She even inspired me.0 Comments 323 weeks
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Anna Cramm10/8/07soz, here is the right one: www,bebo.com/poems-full-of-feelin
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Anna Cramm10/8/07
wow they are really good, have a look at mine... URL: poemsfulloffeeling
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The Bebo **Story** C5/11/07DO YOU HAVE A STORY? OR A POEM? DO YOU NEED HELP? OR JUST WANT TO GET IT RATED? OR GET IT ADVERTISED? WELL IF YOU'RE INTRESTED I'M THE PURSON FOR YOU....... THIS BEBO IS A BEBO STORY COMPOTITION, HELPER, RATOR, AND ADVERTISER! IF YOU INTRESTED LOOK FOR YOURSELF!! HAPPY BEBOING BEBOERS! XXXXXx
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Jean Anne5/11/07i haven't had a chance to read alot but i've become so i come back and read it proporly. so far very cathardic, love it. please check out my poetry at http://iwanttowrite.bebo.com
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Brionna Williams4/22/07You'll check out my poems http://DeneceJ4sing.bebo.com they are about a teenagers everyday life no disrespect your poem are crunk 2
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Emmz4/7/07hi i would have written a review, but the hyperlink for the srars isn't working. so i would give you 5 stars out of 5. i love all of your poems, and they should be published ^__^ you stay on the origianl idea at the start of the poem and maintain it though out the poem. If you want to check out my poems *regarding they're not a touch on yours* the link is http://XxnottruexX.bebo.com
- 3/27/07
the darkness ya its cool but confusing coz i wanted to see sentances going on longer explaining it. Plz review one of my poems. no one has. maybe its not public?
by Poetic Thread 9/26/07not alone just on my own rated so highly just because i know how this feels and i do it to myself often.
by Fiona O 6/30/07Good poem.
Hearts once broken Lots of truth here, painful truth.
by Helen Beaton 6/20/07Repunzle Hi REPUNZLE, well my opinion is why dnt u take the chain off.lol. and run like the tigers u wild katz u.lol. FOR UR ISOLATION i dnt really no how ur feelin, but I FEEL UR PAIN, well done, BRAVO BRAVO, I NO U CANT HEAR ME RIGHT NOW, BUT IM APPLUUDIN U,LOL,
by Athif Dean 5/15/07Awesome I really like your work
by Vampire.Miss. 4/26/07wow ur really talented
by Maddi Mascara 4/26/07keep up the work work
i loved them all
check out mine?
http://wristbands-n-bangles.bebo.com
great i love your poems!have a look at mine
by Ronan Clarke 4/12/07http://nympholeptic.bebo.com
Keep on truckin It is clear that you have a well developed grasp of the english language and your ideas for your poems are creative and pure. One conctructive critisism that i must advise you of though is that your metaphorical portions of your poetry could be more descriptive and they are sometimes a little cliche, but please don't let this discourage you because you have great talent and you are capable of further heights! well done.
by Tanduri Chicken 3/20/07hey hey gotta say i wasnt sure what i was in for when i saw your profile but gotta say i'm impressed.
by Charlene 3/8/07what the hell you doing in a fashion course? haha
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GOOD!! Hey your awsome! check my author page out at http://KwittyKwatPoems.bebo.com
by Kathleen 3/8/07im a member of the AWG [[australian writers guild]]