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W")Ow Amazing Job I Was On The Edge Of MySeat The EntireTime
by H.M. ShortJump 4/30/09
cool kinda confusing but very very good

bravo
by Tom 7/22/08
ITS NOT SCARY ITS NOT FUCKING SCARY, I DID SCARE AT HER FOR 4:51 SECS NOTHING HAPPENED,
by Jesse W 5/25/08
Ooh I think the beginning had a very good descriptive thing going on but towards the middle it slipped and was all blood and gore and when tht happened it dint reli tell u what was going on

I want to know more about the girl btw

Good though
by Courtz 4/3/08
Cool Im Not Really A Fan Of Short Stories, But None Of The Less I Liked Yours Very Much
by Thinking Of You 3/15/08
wow wow that story was amazing. i love how u wrote it so it would make a picture in your head. i liked it so much that i think u should publish it as a book to buy!!
by Matt 3/15/08
WOW HEY MY NAMES TOYA I WRITE ALOT OF HORROR STORIES MYSELF BUT THIS ONE IS AMAZING ,THE WAY YOU OPEN THE STORY WITH A STRONG DESCRIPTION IS FAB MOST HORROR WRITERS DO IT TO GRAB THE READERS ATTENTION, WHERE DO YOU GET YOUR IDEAS FROM ????

TOYA NUMBER 1 FAN....

by Smexxy Smee 12/22/07
woooooooow scary.......
by Jack 10/30/07
janitors closet! propa scared lmao well done its well good!! xxxx
by Heather Shepherd 10/9/07

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11/20/10
Smexxy Smee
hey im so glad sum 1 listens to me lol ! i havnt got a page for my books get but im working on it when i sort evri thing out i will send u one of my books

12/31/07
janitors closet
WHO DO YOU THINK IT IS? MWAH HA HA HA!

11/11/07
Brittany Mckenzie
hey yuo have a cheap bebo mine is better

9/1/07
Crystal D
you suck lol juss joking

5/9/07
Becca
haya i also write stories lol

4/13/07
Mrs.Carr
u r soooo good i had goose bumps just reading it good job keep up the good work

4/7/07