The Darkness
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- Profile created: February 2007
- www.bebo.com/Perdidothedarkness
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- Mystery/Thrillers
- Me, Myself, and I
- For as long as Perdido has known her only family was her demon mother, but yet she feels out of place and longs to be with the humans in the village at the foot of the cave.
This is a short story that will soon be a comic instead, this is only part I..
hope you enjoy it
And to all my fan and anyone that leaves a comment, I will definy try return a thanks but if I can't I'll say it now, THANKS EVERYONE hehe 
I drew her.. I swear it looked so better before i had to re edit the colours, picture etc.. cos the file was too big (sigh)
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Kas0 Comments 339 days
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man my views are low on this...
I totally like this better.. so if u can be bothered give it a read
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Lets draw!
I've finally begun drawing out the real plan for the comic, I got my hand on some skin tones, not many though and I spend all my lunch time doing them, they should be posted on my home page soon!!! yay!0 Comments 1002 days
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Neko Was Here Nyao136 weeks agoum i would lik 2 ask the author of this book if i could add u as a friend
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confusion of the night136 weeks agoits pretty good i havent read tha last chapter but i'll be back when r ya gonna update???
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so kool i just love it
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Paul Carroll141 weeks ago
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Needs work The story concept is a decent one, but you need to do a lot of work to tidy this one up. There are quite few spelling and grammar errors, and it badly needs spacing.
by China Ren 99 weeks agoIf you fix those, that will help a lot.
The future: Dark, corrupt and violent:
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sweet those stories were terrific.
by GannonThe Suffering Wolf 101 weeks agoi felt bad when Perdido's brother was cut like that but it was cool the way you brought him back
and that twist with him and Perdido being light bearers was sweet; i could almost picture the horror on Perdido's adoptive mothers face. BRAVO!!
but you could have spaced the lines further apart and a few other improvements. other than that it was beautiful
you should keep going
WOW!‼ i luv it‼ all yur stories are awsome!☻
by You-Kno-Who 113 weeks agocoollllllllllllllllllllll nice keep up the good work
by WolfKing 114 weeks agoAwesome =) Hey, this story is reli gd! Great writing!
by Brittany 120 weeks agoI just set my page up last nite and wuld luv 2 hear ur opinion,
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Take a look and tell me what yu think?
Thanx and congrats on a gr8 story!
Brill!!!!
by Xx Teenage Ballerina Xx 120 weeks agocompletely fantastic!!!!
I love how u explain THe surroundings!!!!
Im definetly becoming a fan but please write more!!!!!
it should be published!!!!!!!
Brill!!!!
I should know cause im a book bug!!!!
I know whether a book is good or great and the thing about me is i hate stereotype books and no way is this a stereotype and its not just great its
BRILL!!!!!!!
yupperz good job on the story
by Trina 121 weeks agokeep it up