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Me, Myself, and I
Hey everyone!
These poems are all my own original work, feel free to comment or review them.
They're not here to impress anyone, they're here because i felt like sharing a piece of me with you.
My poems do not reflect me during everyday life, though some do describe a feeling or thought i was experiencing at the time.

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Any constructive criticism is welcome as i cannot improve if i don't know what needs work.

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  • Ave Maria

    I do like.

    16 weeks ago
  • Ninaargh
    Ninaargh

    Luiza Ya Bitch, Yours is better than mine! That's not fair!!
    <3

    66 weeks ago
  • Mrs Kirk Hammett
    Mrs Kirk Hammett

    The Planes of Oblivion

    You walk in your tainted haven
    With bare and bleeding souls
    Hand painted with fear and pride
    Masquerade, masquerade
    Run, now you must hide
    For that time is coming again
    And they’ll turn your thoughts
    Into gold and riches
    As veiled ghouls and witches
    Burn, sell and trade.
    Satisfaction fills the gap
    Where once was a soul
    Your soul
    It’s all short-lived
    Thus the time is now
    Gold turns to dust
    Riches to bones
    Your bones
    You cry at the sky
    Which seems,
    Has left you behind.
    It’s crushing your mind. Mind?
    You hath given your mind for ephemeral pleasure..

    You oblivious son-of-a-bitch


    there that's from me for u! ♥

    66 weeks ago
  • Ninaargh
    Ninaargh

    Fuck you Dandan!
    I'll make you a poem when you do what i told you to do! and NO i'm not going to write you a poem about WoW.
    WoW is poo.
    okay?

    KTHNXBAI.

    68 weeks ago
  • X UnderØath X
    X UnderØath X

    MAKE ME A FUCKING POEM SLUT!

    78 weeks ago
  • Mrs Kirk Hammett
    Mrs Kirk Hammett

    Additives. In cola? is my favorite poem ever!!!!!
    I suggest you write a poem about gore and violence..just for me! And Metallica.............

    84 weeks ago
  • Jessicaa
    Jessicaa

    Hey

    I Really Like Your Poems, There Different And Very Unique

    Luv, Jess x

    127 weeks ago
  • Chlod Ward XP
    Chlod Ward XP

    yawwr poems are sooo guuurddd ..... i liked the second one ... want member wat its called ... twas niiiice ... lol ...

    dallia atii ... (soryy welshness)

    127 weeks ago
  • Poetry Reviewer
    Poetry Reviewer

    Oh, and one last thing. Maybe you should give your poems titles and add the notes at the bottom of the poem, just so they're easier to navigate through.

    127 weeks ago
  • Sarah Mullen
    Sarah Mullen

    Hey i like ur poems. They are very good.

    I write a lil but im not as confident about my abilitys as you lol

    But i would really like ur opinion on the few that i have on my blog.

    134 weeks ago
  • Francoise

    great

    137 weeks ago
  • avril Laviigne Roberts 139 weeks ago
  • Angus MacHaggis
    Angus MacHaggis

    Don't be mad at me. I don't give ratings. lol ;) :Z

    140 weeks ago
  • Sarah Boles
    Sarah Boles

    I liked a beatiful night, just obscure enough to insite intrigue but not too abstract, nice style and narrative tone :D

    143 weeks ago
  • Holls
    Holls

    I like ur poems, they are dark and meaningfull.... keep writing!! xx

    143 weeks ago
  • Chloe Huseyin
    Chloe Huseyin

    we are never alone it just feels that way sometimes, keep writing your poems are really good

    143 weeks ago