Poetry.
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- Me, Myself, and I
- Hey everyone!
These poems are all my own original work, feel free to comment or review them.
They're not here to impress anyone, they're here because i felt like sharing a piece of me with you.
My poems do not reflect me during everyday life, though some do describe a feeling or thought i was experiencing at the time.
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Any constructive criticism is welcome as i cannot improve if i don't know what needs work.
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Use of this content (e.g Personal blogs or advertisement) is strictly prohibited.
This pretty much means, That if you would like to use any of my poems or anything, PLEASE ASK.
I will not be happy if i find any of my work anywhere else on the internet being used under someone elses name.
Thankyou.
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Ave Maria16 weeks ago
I do like.
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Ninaargh66 weeks agoLuiza Ya Bitch, Yours is better than mine! That's not fair!!
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Mrs Kirk Hammett66 weeks agoThe Planes of Oblivion
You walk in your tainted haven
With bare and bleeding souls
Hand painted with fear and pride
Masquerade, masquerade
Run, now you must hide
For that time is coming again
And they’ll turn your thoughts
Into gold and riches
As veiled ghouls and witches
Burn, sell and trade.
Satisfaction fills the gap
Where once was a soul
Your soul
It’s all short-lived
Thus the time is now
Gold turns to dust
Riches to bones
Your bones
You cry at the sky
Which seems,
Has left you behind.
It’s crushing your mind. Mind?
You hath given your mind for ephemeral pleasure..
You oblivious son-of-a-bitch
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Ninaargh68 weeks agoFuck you Dandan!
I'll make you a poem when you do what i told you to do! and NO i'm not going to write you a poem about WoW.
WoW is poo.
okay?
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X UnderØath X78 weeks agoMAKE ME A FUCKING POEM SLUT!
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Mrs Kirk Hammett84 weeks agoAdditives. In cola? is my favorite poem ever!!!!!
I suggest you write a poem about gore and violence..just for me! And Metallica............. -
Jessicaa127 weeks agoHey
I Really Like Your Poems, There Different And Very Unique
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Chlod Ward XP127 weeks agoyawwr poems are sooo guuurddd ..... i liked the second one ... want member wat its called ... twas niiiice ... lol ...
dallia atii ... (soryy welshness) -
Poetry Reviewer127 weeks agoOh, and one last thing. Maybe you should give your poems titles and add the notes at the bottom of the poem, just so they're easier to navigate through.
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Sarah Mullen134 weeks agoHey i like ur poems. They are very good.
I write a lil but im not as confident about my abilitys as you lol
But i would really like ur opinion on the few that i have on my blog.
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Francoise137 weeks ago
great
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avril Laviigne Roberts139 weeks agohello you
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Angus MacHaggis140 weeks agoDon't be mad at me. I don't give ratings. lol
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Sarah Boles143 weeks agoI liked a beatiful night, just obscure enough to insite intrigue but not too abstract, nice style and narrative tone
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Holls143 weeks agoI like ur poems, they are dark and meaningfull.... keep writing!! xx
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Chloe Huseyin143 weeks agowe are never alone it just feels that way sometimes, keep writing your poems are really good
















Loving it!! omg, very awesomistic hehe. i like all of em. you are great!
i look forward to reading more. . .
by Stevie Solution 83 weeks agoThe Diamond in the Rough heehee The most original and fuckin awesome poems i've read
by Mrs Kirk Hammett 84 weeks agohaha sweet randomly stumbled accross this. i hate poetry but yours was pretty cool. keep it up, i like it
by Kevin Dougans 123 weeks agoBest Yet i think your the best writter yet!
by Jasmine 126 weeks agoi love the "A Beautiful Night" That was pretty awesome!
Keep it up!
Loves You have some wonderful poetry here. I especially loved 'Beautiful Night'. The imagery in it was outstanding. I don't particularily like the one about nature, it didn't really seem as though you were trying, but judging by the note at the end of it, I suppose you never intended to.
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hey! jst had a look tru ur poems ur pretty gd!! i lyk dis poem bst! cz well i ges in a way i no wat u mean!! dis spoke 2 me in a way!!! ny wy ......... now i snd wierd!! lol u rely r gd!! bye bye xxxxxxxxxx
by Wen-Sad U-Gotta Smile 127 weeks agogood you are very good!!!
by Kate M 127 weeks agocheck out mine
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Maybe it's just not my type of poem, but I wasn't too fond of these... Saying that I quite liked your first four ones, which had lovely imagery, especially the first one. The rap is also good as a first attempt.
by Poetry Reviewer 127 weeks agoCliché, I can see how you'd still be finding your feet. But I agree that it was more like a piece of writing. It was well written, but I feel it lacked the flair of your newer ones.
Nature started off well, but it soon become clear that the rhyme scheme was extremely forced, especially the last line about flowers. It also has a feeling of being written very fast.
Straight from the Heart also started well, but then it seems like you decided to give up writing. If I were you I'd keep the beginning and finish this one, as I'd love to see a proper result.
But please don't take any of this as critisism, as I really loved the first four, and the fact that I haven't talked about them much is because I can't find anything wrong with them. Keep writing like THAT, and you'll go far!
Check out mine?
http://www.bebo.com/rainbowsbegin