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Second chance
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- www.bebo.com/secondchancethebook
- Category:
- Mystery/Thrillers
- Publisher:
- Author house self publishing
- Me, Myself, and I
- Second chance is a: Crime Thriller.
Lisa made the wrong choice causing her to get caught up with drugs, pain and murder. Wanting a new chance at life she went to the police and when a spout of undercover work went wrong she was left scarred and alone. But when her past comes back to haunt her she finds herself right back where she started.
David is coming to terms with his wife's passing and in the process buries himself in his work. He stumbles across a girl struggling in life and needing to have a second chance and so he feels like he should help her, but his help gets her into more trouble. Now, two years after they first met, her past comes back to haunt her and David tries to correct what he messed up.
(its only bits of the chapters because they are too long to post in full)
PLEASE REVIEW!!
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NEW BOOK COVER
any better? let me know0 Comments 296 weeks
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Finally the ending is here
The happy ending I have been asked to post is finally here!!
So take a look and post a review, Second Chance should be out in bookshops after christmas
I know what I will be spending my xmas money on.0 Comments 296 weeks
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heya
please, can you take some time 2 comment or review my book,
i love reading your commetns and always take your feedback on board
ttfn
sammie0 Comments 308 weeks
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Chris Stewart6/6/07Hey there, I thought this would interest you.. Literay Mania! and Writers07 have joined forces to bring you a new website. For enthusiastic readers and budding writers alike - Literary Den! You can find us at: http://www.literaryden.co.uk Please join the forum, and leave a new thread with a link to your books and some info about them. We will then add them to the website. "Why join the website?" Well, we are currently running a short story competition, we have a large comminity of experienced writers, and can give writing hints and tips. Also, we are a growing community, and on the forums, we get to chat about all sorts - not necessarily just books! We have "general" sections too! Hope i've got you interested! Have a good one.
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Brian Byrne5/1/07
Im just wondering......how long did it take for ur book to be featured after u applied 4 it 2 be? bcos I applied about 2wks ago and it still says my application is under review. thanks!
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Paul Carroll4/28/07Greetings fellow writer. My name is Paul Carroll. I am the lead administrator of a new group on Bebo known as Literary Mania. Authors and readers alike are welcome to join and I ask that you too will join us and encourage others to join as well. The URL can be found below. Also, if/when you decide to join, I ask that you add me to your friends list in order to receive the weekly newsletter from me. It is sent in the mail section on Saturdays. Thank you for your time. Let fate be your destination, but be your own guide. Paul Carroll. http://literary-mania.bebo.com
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Brian Byrne4/12/07
ya with that text, i think it actually looks much more appealing. And the title "second chance" is really appealing because it leaves the customer wondering what the book is actaully about. And considering that the steps are actually a metaphor, the whole thing seems much more appealing. but i think having a person on the cover or soething along those lines would attract more attention.hope that helps!
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Brian Byrne4/11/07
please please please read the opening chapters to my short novel, entitled 6.00am!! thanks!! http://thrillerstoriestwist.bebo.com
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Kayy4/4/07i think this book sounds rely good__x
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Kayy3/22/07
this looks fun
Ni.. Nicely written, the parts that you have put up anyway! It's a bit hard to follow without the full chapters mind you.
by China Ren 6/27/07Anyway, grammar and spelling is all good, though there were one or two small parts that I felt were a little bit 'choppy' (can't remember what chapters they were now, sorry!)
Keep going and luck on getting published! Put in a good work for me if you do.
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Avarice! - http://Avarice1.bebo.com
This is good This is good, but the lack of full chapters makes a little bit confusing. You may also want to add more to keep people reading. On the whole. Nice work
by Simone 6/23/07second chance hi fantastic writing the use of powerful imagery is great
by Laura 5/30/07When you are reading the book you feel you are part of her life and from the very first page you begin to emphasise with her it is as if the pages are glued to your fingers
A must read for thriller lovers
Difficult one... This is a difficult one to review because you only give tasters of the novel. Because of that I find it hard to get a handle on the emotion or suspense of it.
by Chris Stewart 5/16/07That said you have a good writing style and even better discriptive skills (which can be the difference between good and bad books).
Well done and best of luck getting published. If not then get the rest up here...
Screenplay? It was interesting... a few grammatical errors, but the flow was quite good.
by Shirley Dee 4/27/07Would be interested in seeing whether you could may develop this into a screen play.
Please come along and review my story
http://taleswithatwist.bebo.com
Thanks
Shirl x
Really good The tasters left me wanting to read more! Are you trying to get it published? Cos if you are then i am in the same boat as you!
It is really good, usually it's hard to find good writing on bebo, and i mean that in the nicest possible way but yours was really good.
by Lisa Sills 4/18/07I actually am trying 2 get as many reviews as possible before i send my story off to a publishers, its very long (by bebo's standards) but it would be helpful if u read a little bit and left me a comment cos i am trying to find any problems so i can fix them. If u want to here's the URL;
http://strangebelievers.bebo.com
Almost perfect if not perfect! I was reading and i wanted more but if there was more to read there i would have given five stars! i can tell the book was going to get really good and exciting!! finish and print as soon as possible please i want to read!
by Lewis Kennedy 4/12/07cool! ha ur talented. dont no about the cover tho, for most young people, colour is important, because i no for a fact that id dismiss it as another boring old bk if i saw it in a shop(which it definetely isnt!)
by Brian Byrne 4/11/07******second chapter review*******
wow.I actually cant wait to see where this is going!!Honestly!!!It reminds me of lies of silence, which i loved. If you manage to publish this, i get dibbs on the 1st copy ok??!!!
o ya i wrote another chapter of my story......anyway, i cant wait to read more of that book lol!