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Fallen Poems From Above
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- Profile created: February 2007
- www.bebo.com/Steph-Farag-Poems
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- Stephanie Farag
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- Me, Myself, and I
- I wrote these poems mostly last year when i was going through a rough patch during my life, i will try making some more. I mostly like to write about love since everyone in thier life wants someone to love, its one of those words i cant stop thinking about. I have writen some quite depressive ones which when i read over again makes me wonder how bad i was at being happy. I do wish to become better at writing different sorts as i do like writing poetry and also some books (which arent finshed). Thank youxx
Stephx
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Poem 9 "For someone i care about <3"
It's taken me some time to write because lately i've been busy with school and also friends.
This poem i cant describe...the words describe themselfs. So i cant really explain it. But for those who know me, you should have the brains!
Steph<30 Comments 294 weeks
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Welcome; introduction to my poems and clear info on poem 7
Hello
just thank you for visting this page or reading my poems first of all if you have.
I started writing poems last year(2006) when i couldnt get my feelings out or undertsand what i was feeling, and i found that this helped me alot. The first 5 poems all about love(which i havent found yet) and still im looking for my prince. The 6th poems is unquie i think, only because this was my first depressive poem which really did happen and i found it great diffcult to express or show this to my fellow friends. Instead i showed them that poem. The 7th poem which i have been working on for 2 days :p because havent had much time to write and i havent had anything to express. But that 7th poem i wrote i dunno really why or what it explains, but it just tells people alittle about my mind and how it works(if you understand what im on). It means to me that i see days which are very often that seem dark to me, and the days seem the same and all gloom. The parts about the stars explain that i see my friends will always be there for me.
Thats it really thank you once again if you read this and understood it
and im sorry if things are not correctly spelt
Stephx0 Comments 324 weeks
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If Love Was A Game...
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How Can I Tell You?
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Crazy
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I Wish*
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What Is The Meaning Of Life?
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Cuts That Bleed
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This Day...To Day
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Star
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For someone i care about <3
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Cold Nights
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Dreams
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The Way You Make Me Feel
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12/23/08
My Heart broke on the rocks of yer love
Keep the rhyming up love you're proper fab. makes me smile just reading your poetry and how good it is! HbL's (heart break Lads)
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Kev Broderick5/29/08
i take it in the shitter!!!!
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Sugar Honey Ice Tea5/12/07WOW i love your poems!!!!!!
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Open Poetry4/24/07Hi Steph, I have enjoyed looking at some of your stuff. I think you should consider entering our competition. Full details and on-line entry form can be found at www.sonnetcompetition.com.
































simplistic Your poetry seems very simplistic. This isnt necassarily a bad thing, particularly when it comes to something as broadly defined as "love", but the fact is i was bored of your poems as soon as i finished, and i can guarantee that they wont stick in anyones mind for any length of time. Sorry to be so brutal, but i like to be honest, and maybe you'll become better if you dont constantly hear praise.
by Smoke Knives 4/19/08I gave you an honest review, return the favour maybe?
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mintmintmint x
by ANDI333 3/6/08its good but sad and depressing sorry too sad for me sorry
by Blackwidow Ireland 11/24/07Life Simply amazing, a good question "what is life?"
by Vickee T 8/15/07wow those were pretty awesome cuts that bleed really spoke to me keep it up http://good-enough-by-cath.bebo.com
by Chubby 5/25/07nice.. love..it..lol..
by Sexdrugspistol 4/7/07ohh check my one aswell..
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!!! wow hun you should become a poet coz they are reely good
by Little Miss Depp 2/27/07love u lots
shaynaxx