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Way Back Home
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- Profile created: February 2007
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- Me, Myself, and I
- Four college students head for Alaska for reseach, but not know the dangers laying ahead. Just to tell you the chapters are short.
It's my first book so give me a brake. Read the chapters please, then you'll know whats going on.
Here is my other book http://-Awakening-.bebo.com
Here is the sequel http://bebo.com/WayBackHome2
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Sequel
Who ever wanted to know what happened to the four college students here is the link to the sequel.
http://bebo.com/WayBackHome2
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Completed
I finally finished the story. I hope you all like it because I think it's good, but it's not the greatest.
So enjoy. Comment, Review, or become a fan please.
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Characters
Bill Richardson- College jock, altho he is smart he can be dum at times. Diana's boyfriend.
Diana Mayfield- College Cheerleader, one of the rudest people ever but everyone loves her. Bill's Girlfriend.
Elle Tafftin- Exchange student from Britian to the U.S., College student body President. Best friends of Diana.
Paul Peteton- Captin of the chess team and of the Captin of the Meds of the future. Best friends of Bill.
These are the MAIN characters in MY story!1 Comment 322 weeks
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Happy endings11/11/07I liked it. Don't just leave it there though.. write more please
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Nick10/24/07
Start thinking something you really really want, cause this is astounding. the person that sent this to me said their wish came true 10 mins after they read the mail so I thought what the heck. You have just been visited by Dr.zuess's Cat in the Hat. He will grant you one wish. Make your wish when the count down is over. 10.. 9.. 8.. 7.. 6.. 5.. 4.. 3 .. 2. 1..... MAKE A WISH Post this on 10 bands/groups/profiles within the hour you read this. If you do, your wish will come true If you don't it will become the opposite.
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M-A-R-Y-Jo4/21/07Try reading the chapters
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Joanna Price4/4/07How the fuck do you read your 'Way Back Home' book?! I've been looking at your page for ages and can't see it anywhere! You've got other books but not that one and I want to read that one!!! Fuck it then. Can't be bovered! Laterz...
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Karma Chameleon3/17/07u still forgot the llama.... what if martin sent diana or diane (forgot her name) a llama bcuz she loves llamas and bill doesnt so she breaks up w/ him and dates martin thuh end
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Elizabeth3/4/07lol
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Karma Chameleon3/4/07*grins* It is now
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M-A-R-Y-Jo3/4/07That's not how it goes.
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Karma Chameleon3/4/07Chapter 9: The group sat inside the cabin for hours, wondering what happened to Bill. Suddenly, there was a sharp knock at the door. Elle got up and answered it. Attached to the cabin was a llama tied to the post with Bill strapped on top. And there was a note attached to him. It read: "Leave the cabin... before something worse happens!"
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Karma Chameleon3/4/07oh well whatever!! lol
OMG THE DOG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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M-A-R-Y-Jo3/4/07Really the dog isn't a puppy. It's about two to three years old.
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Karma Chameleon3/4/07omg the puppy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!
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M-A-R-Y-Jo2/25/07thx
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Karma Chameleon2/24/07i really like the two chapters u have now i cant wait to read the rest of it!








umm well the story line is good. the dialoge is confusing. you shouldnt have to have the characters saying each others names all the time. notice in other books the way they do it. try putting things like Diana said or Elle complained. add some emotion in there dude. keep it up and consider this please.
by Bella Cullen 2/11/10<none> Well done. But may I suggest you tone down the speech; books need narrative. Try turning it into a play
by Frederick 6/5/07Not bad.. You've got a good idea and good plot, but i found all the dialogue a bit confusing as it's hard to tell who's speaking what. It's not bad for a first book though.
by Debble Pebble 6/2/07Story I like it so far! I like the part at the end of I think chapter seven when they find the footprint!!
by Karma Chameleon 2/26/07