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Dreams in the Shadows - The Book <dreamsintheshadows>

"The Story of Erica Pike"

	04/10/2007 Edit	799 dagen geleden
	Just a basic edit today but more new material coming on tonight.
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	Claire Humphreys zei…	798 dagen geleden
	Ok that was a real powerfull read. Its gripping for the reader all the edits where great made a big impact was very deep Jus one tiny edit u forget a word. my mother simply sat alone in one the old chairs maybe it should be: my mother simply sat alone in one OF the old chairs. ( I think its a better flow)
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