Deniss. <SirStranjak>

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The Battle Of Love208 jours il y a
 
Love is a force,
That sucks me in,
A constant battle,
That I can't win.

I despise it,
Hate feelin' like this,
Hate yearning deeply,
For you sweet kiss.

But I can't help it,
Nothing I can do,
Not my fault,
I'm in love with you.

And it pains me,
To be in this fight,
For in this battle of love,
There's no end in sight.
 posté par Deniss. 

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Peaches a dit...Il y a 208 jours
 
First one on bebo?
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Deniss. a dit...Il y a 208 jours
 
Second I think....
But I thought more people should see it so tell your friends! :D
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Darren a dit...Il y a 203 jours
 
hahahahahaha nice poem!
soft!
;)
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Gaylord Focker a dit...Il y a 203 jours
 
Emo.
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Deniss. a dit...Il y a 203 jours
 
It's not an emo poem :P
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Ndy C Mofo' a dit...Il y a 203 jours
 
what the hell??
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Gaylord Focker a dit...Il y a 203 jours
 
"Pains me", "Hurts"-twice, "there's no end in sight", "that I can't win". Pretty emo/depressing to me :P
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Deniss. a dit...Il y a 203 jours
 
Ah well it's about love.
But yeah I take your point :L
and what ya mean Andy?
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Ndy C Mofo' a dit...Il y a 202 jours
 
nothin...just a poem on bebo...bit unorthodox
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Deniss. a dit...Il y a 202 jours
 
Ah I thought it was time to hit a bigger audience :P
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Gut-A-Slut a dit...Il y a 99 jours
 
Hmmm didnt know you could feel love.

Being a croatian robot and all...xP

Manufactured to destroy those who first felt love, women

Also the inventers of being beaten, cleaning and sucking dick.
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Deniss. a dit...Il y a 99 jours
 
...
Wow
So that was racism... and sexism... in the one post
Impressive even for you, I must say
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Rosaliee.' a dit...Il y a 99 jours
 
Awh Denis :) I Like It :D
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Deniss. a dit...Il y a 99 jours
 
Thanks :)
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